Omygoooood i loooove this! i love the way you write!

I enjoyed this story as well. Sorry you got a bad review. I think that's incredibly immature and not just a little mean. If I don't like a story; for a valid reason like terrible grammar, spelling, completely unbelievable plot or that the characters personalities are written so OOC that they're actually original characters with canon names then I PM the author. Anyone who takes the time to write and share in the hopes that others will enjoy deserve respect.

This was very nicely written. I didn't know what to expect when I clicked onto the title. And watched the page pop up. But this was surprising tender. Naruto, was so caring and gentle with Sasuke. He didn't look at Sasuke with disgust or malice either. Sasuke, I really felt sorry for him. He must have had a hard life that left him feeling inadequate and insecure. He probably didn't like himself very much at all. And didn't think anyone else could. I guess that's why he was asking and needing to hear from Naruto. Why Naruto was willing to continue to be there for him and to care so much for him. I really liked this.

This was nicely written. The characters were beautiful.

Poor Naruto He must has been so hurt all the time!
Orochimaru and Kabuto!?' (I love Orochimaru but WHTF! SEX!?)
Finally Naruto!
Yes...Sasuke was blind...very blind! and Naruto too. They like each other but there were blind!
Good job sweetie!.

Do not let stupid angry people bother you. Those people are just angry that people didn't hug them enough when they were kids and so they have to try their hardest to make other people feel as bad as they do. I think your story was sweet and well thought out. :)

good for you. be proud of your own story and defend it.

This was an excellent story and I still hope to read a sequel or more NARUsasu from you

Oh by the way Hell's Heat keep your rude comments to yourself and your little buddies too; it's not welcomed at all

No worries about what that reviewer said, your story's great, I'd like reading others, maybe even longer ones ;)
So go on writing ! :)
tchuss

Aww I'm sorry to hear people are being me I loved your story and I wish you would continue it!

So i read Hell's review and i didn't find it to be that rude. Beside the 'effort comment', He/she actually just gave his/her point of view. As an author you have to accept any critics. Plus, should i tell you that author notes are not allowed here. You clearly write this just because they didn't praise you, i found some other reviews more disrepectful than this one (which i found rather relevant on the quality of ur story). If i wasn't lazy right now i would have report this fic.

i like your stories... i hope you will continue to write stories... especially narusasu

Awww cute and awesome, I loved it and excellent job

It was a really good story!

oh my hearttttt! Ahhh. This is just too adorableeeee!

This is so sweet. I like this shy, hurtful Sasuke. He so uke it makes me squeal. It's adorable.