This was such a great story! Sad but beautiful. I really loved Katniss in this. The fact that she didn't want to be someone's wife was admirable and she stuck to her beliefs. Really loved it!

Why didnt she wanted to marry him?
If she loved him so much
Then why did she let him die
Its not fair she lived a long life

Perfect is the only word that comes to mind. perfect.

I had to stop crying to write this review, that was spot on. You really know your history and your characters. Thanks and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

I loved it that you related Katniss and Peeta to Greta Garbo and John Gilbert! You know your material pretty well! I also think that in real life, Greta G. life story is parallel to Katniss Everdeen's life in the book (father died/girl worked for the family/sister died).

Gorgeous story. Thanks so much for writing!

Such a sad story.. :(. Makes me mad she never agreed, and he allowed his anger to draw him out of control.

OMG...simply tragic!

Oh my gosh, this is so intense. So heartbreaking. So entirely perfect and tragic and difficult to read. An entirely new way to be star-crossed, for sure.

Fuck katniss she should have married him.

Yes! I loved this! So raw, real and heartbreaking story, beautifully woven with Everlark to create the perfect amount of angst. This was really fantastic, but everything you put forth is.

Nicely done

Sad and beautiful! Gut-wrenching, actually.