Nice short story. Good luck with your future stories.

Incredibly sexy drabble and very much in character for these two!

Very good

great one-shot :D sexy and cute at same time :D

Sweet! i love it! :)

You're right, there definitely needs to be more of these two. And I thought you wrote them splendidly, though I'm a bit surprised you didn't add the parts where they fought Rustyrose. Don't get me wrong, I liked it! Hopefully you'll be in the mood to write more of them soon. :)

:3 Yay elfever fic. There's not enough of them around. Although I think more have been springing up recently... I like it.

I like it! Yeah, she really hates being told what to do but I don't think she minds it with Elfman so much any more _