Ella Enchanted reference? Nice. It's not what I was expecting, but I like it.

So I couldn't actually work out if I'd reviewed this before & according to this I haven't so... I really love this story.

Awesome work. I loved this.

IS THERE GOING TO BE RUMBELLE?!

This is so heart breaking! Been crying the entire chapter... So much feels :(( Good job Ms. Author

this was beautiful. I can't believe I had never read this. Thank you for writing this

I'm sorry that I didn't find this until it was completely finished and didn't get to sit down and read it until it was more than a year old, but I still HAD to let you know what a wonderful read this is. A real epic with adventure and drama - like a real fairy tale. :) More than anything it reminds me of how much I adored Graham and how much I miss him. I've kept watching and love other characters too, but he was my original favorite and this story highlighted all the many reasons why. You wrote it wonderfully and am so glad I got a chance to read it!

Not that I'm complaining but it sounds strangly like Lion King 2: Simba's Pride (which I love by the way). And it's kind of hilarious when I imagine Regina as Zira.
That would be it, I'm going to go and read the next chapter. Great story

What a beautifully written story! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Well not much to worry about here, considering Emma's heart can't be ripped out. Unless that episode where Cora tried to rip out Emma's heart came out after you wrote and published this chapter.

oh my god ruby and grumpy are timon and pumba

Wow! This ended beautifully! Thank you for such an amazing story!

I love this Story It's really great D

loved it, just breathtakingly loved it (:

Yes. I did think you would. BUT IM SO UNBELIEVABLY GLAD YOU DIDNT