This was really sweet, I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for sharing!

Mathilde

Great job, that was rather fun to read on how a smart eleven-year old Albus viewed Hogwarts. I bet Severus' portrait was very surprised on having a talk with Albus Severus Potter.

This was sweet and fun. I especially like that Albus thinks Severus Snape is nice. :). Nice extra little tidbit to the series.

This is wonderful, I love the part about Snape's portrait.

That was lovely. Truly, I loved seeing Albus and his dad exchange letters between each other and it was all so sweet. You wrote it well. You gave Albus a believable personality and Harry seemed well in character. I fail at writing Harry so... Yeah, I salute anyone who does not. The only thing that bothered me a bit was that you made Harry address Albus with his middle name... That just irked me a bit. Why would he? I just can't imagine someone addressing their son with their middle name included with the first. It just seems odd.

Lol, but otherwise, I thought this was amazing. Well done. :)

Cute! I love reading about the relationship between Albus Severus and Harry. You've characterized Harry really well. This is exactly the sort of father I personally believe Harry would become. I love the idea of Albus S. sending letters to his father too, and totally believeable given what we see of him at King's Cross. The only suggestion is that you put a horizontal line in between each letter to make every letter distinguishable from the next.

I really liked the twist where Albus was sorted into Slytherin instead of Gryffindor. The whole fic was very well-written, but it's a bit disorientating to separate one letter from the next. Line breaks would do wonders. But overall, this was excellent, good job!

I honestly loved this. Albus has such a clear voice here, such a solid personality, that is similar, but not too similar, to Harry himself. I love father!Harry, and him giving Al advice was so cute. Also, I adored the Halloween section! Made me sniffle a little!

i haven't read a letter fic in ages and this definitely didn't disappoint! it was beautifully written and i really loved the relationship between albus and harry. i must admit, i do love albus in slytherin (although i think i've written him in every house except hufflepuff, for some reason :3) and i really liked that he met snape's portrait and talked to him.

the halloween bit was just ajflsdfsd perfect and i must admit i shed a few tears at that bit. especially the last letter in the fic.

great job! :)

This was so lovely! I adored the father/son relationship between Harry and Albus - and I'm so glad you made Harry accepting of Al being a Slytherin, I really don't think he'd disown him or anything which a lot of fics have him doing. The amount of canon details in here were fantastic, but my favourites have to be Jon Creevey and James setting up the portable swamps - he sounds like an absolute terror! Lovely fic, thanks for sharing :)

Awww, sweet father/son relationship. I can totally see Harry being like that with his kids. Great job!

So sweet! Harry is definitely more mature than I was expecting, but I guess he had to grow up eventually. I really like it.

This was very cute! Their father-son bond showed really well here, and their characters shine through in the letters. I've always liked the idea of Albus being a Slytherin, and there were a lot of little details that I really liked. The last couple of letters were extremely cute. :)

That was lovely, your characterization of Harry and Albus was wonderful. I like that you put in that letter that Albus wrote to Harry about not being sad on Halloween, it really showed how close they were. Great job!

Very cute! I like the format you used and your characterization of Albus is well done through the letters.