i want more chapters...

Please update soon

please update!

I love your story ! I want to know when the next chapter
arrive ? (Sorry for my english, i'm french so...)

Why is it that I keep shipping Itachi and sakura

I like it! This is good... Especially her relationship with the Akatsuki. I never saw them as bad guys... so I like it. Thank you for this!

FYI not 2 rude, but the jutsu is actually
Mind Transfer Jutsu
Just FYI.

continue the story

Sasuke is not worth it! Go for Shikamaru!

I love ur Story! I hope you update soon pls! I want to see how I do the events of Shippuden pls!

I never do that kind of thing, but I feel obliged to post this comment, your story is really filled with shit. I feel like I'm always rereading the same stories with Sakura who becomes the child of Pein / Nagato and who befriends Konoha. There is almost no originality, you do not even have to change the story a bit, you simply took over the manga and I find it just horrible and repetitive. The relationship between Sasuke and Sakura comes out of nowhere, the same goes for the fact that Sakura became a Konoha shinobi without the Hokage having any suspicion of his affiliation to the Akatsuki. In addition, I found your Sakura even dull than the original, she did not even move her ass to save her friends and even less the Hokage while she could do with the powers you have her give, I can understand that she does not want to disobey Nagato but she is intelligent, she should make her own judgment and her own choices, damn. And Sakura's feelings are so insipid, she killed all her village in cold blood and did not feel any remorse, whereas even Itachi who had killed all his clan had great remorse. You never separate the points of view of the characters, suddenly you find yourself with Naruto and Sakura and then the line after Shikamaru and Asuma, you do not even try to tell the difference, it's distressing. The story would have been much more interesting if you had written more seriously, and I'm sorry because it could have had good potential. If I tell you all this, it is not to demoralize or insult your style of writing free of charge, on the contrary, it is to make you understand what was wrong with your writing.
In short, I hope you can continue writing and I can see another fiction from you.

Wow!

can you pls update it has been 4 years if you dont want to update can i pls adopt the story?

I HATE SASXSAKU I DO SUPPORT SHIKAXSAKU PLEASE LET SHIKA BE WITH SAKURA

Ugh my head hurts from reading so fast because I can't wait to find out what happens next in this amazing fanfic