this is an awesome story. hope you come back to it at some point of time

I can see that you're still active on here from the fact that you follow stories that were started as recently as last month, and while you have no obligation to return to this story I think it would be nice if you could at least formally put it up for adoption.

Really a shame you gave up on this. It has an unique feel.

Is this story still going on? Are there any similar story?

K: We love this! I dont know if you still visit this sight based on your last updated chapter but in case you do is there any thought of you picking up this story again or revising it? It was wonderful to read and I loved watching your Harry grow into someone competent and powerful without him becoming op. Best of luck to you!

This story was awesome man. I don't know why u abandoned it but its definitely a sad state of affairs. Thanks for sharing nevertheless!

Darn, scuppered before it could get to the revenge.

It's an amazing story. I love how you created and enriched the history of the House of Potter. Your characterization of Harry is splendid, the naivety you portrayed at the beginning is a breath of fresh air. This is how an 11 years old should react ! Well done! Incredible work.

Always writers fall into this trap. Everything was going good until you decided to have Harry steal from dumbledore instead of simply just asking him. Yeah break into headmasters office like that.. even in the magical setting there are logical consistencies that exist for a purpose else one could just wish things into existence. Wasted my time reading this.

Well written.! Really hope more people wrote like it.

Really enjoyed this story and I'm sad to see it isn't completed or likely to be, was a fun afternoon though

This story is absolutely amazing and I hope you will update again. : )

Wish you update this even though I know it is a foolish hope.

This story was honestly intresting. The premise was good, start with a Harry Potter with basically nothing and have him build himself up.

I found a few issues with the way this was done but still compared to many other stories on this site those are acceptable. Those were that for some reason only the Potters and Longbottoms were funding the light side; that the family lines if they died out would still be able to have lords instead of it just being that the properties, funds, investments; and honestly that the Dursleys would ever have custody of Harry let alone throw him out when the goverment would be on their asses once it was know they have an 11 yearold criminal runaway. Other issues in the naritive I noticed were either explaned in later chapters or realitivly minor.

I would suggest a beta as gramatical and structual errors are realitivly common in your story.

You did an amazing job with this story and I hope you are able to finish writing your version of the magical world.

This is amazing I hope you come back to it.