Well hope to see you pick this up again, it was just starting to get good (although a little less clinging to every word of canon in every situation would be appreciated). All in all, good chapter.

If the tschikake is STUPID enough to do this, you do realize this event right here, kicks off the fourth shinobi war? (no ifs, ands or buts about it). Kinda a stupid move on his part if the namikaze can already do the jutsu they're all terrified of, isn't it?

Um mizuki wasn't a sensei.. He was a "teacher's assistant"...and I think "sensei" is thrown around about like the word "genius" is in the naruto stories...A "sensei" actually has to TEACH YOU, so mizuki? NOT A SENSEI... Kakashi? NOT A SENSEI... Sasuke? NOT a "genius" if he was then why did he complete the tree-walking at the same time naruto did, when naruto has FAR more reserves? And he never figured out why itachi killed his clan...In a single night... Without anyone coming to their aid... Seriously does the dude need a neon sign saying "it was sanctioned"?... Negji? NOT a "genius"... Seriously do I even need to state why? Shika? Maybe a genius but how didn't he (and his whole clan for that matter) know who naruto was with just one LOOK? (that's not even on "genius" level, that's just basic observation). Naruto even has the DEAD-GIVEAWAY of the verbal "tic" and the symbol on his back. (for kushina)

I liked it it's still pretty good.

Please update

Plz continue this very interesting story

oh god this story is so bad it makes me laugh, so thanks for making me laugh.

You suck
Should have made him at least strong enough to defeat a drunk slut that is Tsunade

She’s still a Meek dog
This story has almost no proper deviations from canon

A 12 year old boy felt his heart break because a girl he knows absolutely nothing about will never love him? Come on seriously I hate authors who write stuff like that. It makes absolutely no sense, sure Naruto had a crush on her but especially at this point in time there is absolutely no way he loves her because like I said before he knows absolutely nothing about her and you can’t love someone if you don’t even know them. Not to mention Naruto doesn’t even know what love is since he has never had anyone love him.

Love this! Keep going!

Hey ok I like your story so far.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Great job please continue

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