I demand an update. Immediately

I liked it very much :) so romantic and beautiful :) love it :)

Update this story soon please

Well this story is pretty awesome if I do say so myself. Brilliantly written. Love the way it's going. Can't wait for more .

That was very sweet. I especially loved chapter one and the whole dance of uncertainty they had at the beginning and then Pam being romantic and all loving and possessive of Tara, I must admit I have a weak spot for that. The bit by the beach was great as well, I loved how you showed how capable Tara was of taking the lead the moment Pam needed her. Good job.

Ciao

Great story...looking forward to the next chapter!

Loved it. Favorite line: "So I guess you're a breast girl then?" TEE HEE! Looking forward to more.

omg dont stop there! keep going! love it

Nice ;)

Off to a great start. Can't wait to read more.-Pam being romantic...love it.

I would give tips on improvement but you are doing a kick ass job. I love this and can't wait for more. I love you balance of sexy sassy and adoration that you having going between them. I seriously can't wait for an update.

i like it its cute