i've just re-read this for about, uhh, i can't count and it still remains as one of my top favorite story ever
i'm healed once again.
thank you ..!
heart heart heart !

This story was amazing I remember starting it when I was younger but couldn't finish it because at the time I didn't approve of these whole love triangle thing it was a little to real but now that Im 21 this was a fantastic read and going straight to my favorites

I liked so much your story. It was well writed. kiss

Welp, I accidentally hit the button to post review when I wasn't done reviewing so I'm re-posting this review as a guest.

This is one of those fanfics that I would categorize as the kind of story I can read over and over again. It's just that beautiful...

You've managed to make Sasuke and Naruto keep to their personalities in the manga/anime while also making them mature into parenthood. Although I almost stopped reading this because of my personal bias against Shika/Naru (or anything other than sasu/naru), their relationship dynamic was interesting. You could feel the difference in the kind of love Shika/Naru shared vs. the one Sasuke/Naru shared just from the way you wrote them and their sex scenes. This impresses me. I also very much loved how you could feel Sasuke's struggle to integrate himself back into Naruto's life and his unknown son's (Naoyuki's) as well. How much time has been lost and how much society has moved on without Sasuke in their lives. And yet, at the same time, how much time hasn't changed for the love between Sasuke and Naruto.

Anyways, thank you for sharing this story! There is a lot I love about this story that I haven't mentioned here. Also, I don't think you need to re-write this story. I'm not sure how you can surpass what you've already posted here. There are a lot of lines that really hit me in the feels and I think you are an amazing writer with talent. I hope I can write like you some day.

This is one of those fanfics that I would categorize as the kind of story I can read over and over again. It's just that beautiful...

You've managed to make Sasuke and Naruto keep to their personalities in the manga/anime while also making them mature into parenthood. Although I almost stopped reading this because of my personal bias against Shika/Naru (or anything other than sasu/naru), their relationship dynamic was interesting. You could feel the difference in the kind of love Shika/Naru shared vs. the one Sasuke/Naru shared just from the way you wrote them and their sex scenes. This impresses me. I also very much loved how you could feel Sasuke's struggle to integrate himself back into Naruto's life and his unknown son's (Naoyuki's) as well. How much time has been lost and how much society has moved on without Sasuke in their lives. And yet, at the same time,

Should?" Sasuke's eyes narrowed' I had a heart attach here...

yay I get to see pregnant Naruto in action

When Naruto and Shika break is there going to be some NejiShika? ughhhh I hope so I love that ship

This is brilliant! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. Definetly one of the best sasunaru stories I've read.

This was extremely impressive SasuNaru Fanfic and I truly enjoyed reading it too!

Hi there! So after three or so days of reading all of your SasuNaru FF, all I can say is that your writing is amazing. Thank you for writing these stories and I'm so thankful that you decided to write SasuNaru fanfictions. I really love the way you characterize Sasuke and Naruto and the realistic (or as close as realistic as one could get) situations they were placed in. I hope you could come back to FF one day and finish off the other two stories you said you were going to follow up on.

Once again, thank you for your splendid writing and hopefully see you soon' :)

Great story. I really enjoyed reading it :)

I already see he story ending as sasunaru, so I am going to stop reading any further.
aside from that I must say that you have done a great job writing this fic!

Sounds depressing but I'm interested...

I was soooo waiting for the moment Naruto told Sasuke why the hell he didn't tell him about their son!
Of course it was because the bastard wouldn't listen to Naruto when he tried to! Sasuke really deserved that one and you wrote that scene REALLY well, the suspense was cool and the revenge was sweet (for me to read that is) 3