Ugh, why'd it have to stop there?! Why so quick with lemon?! I demand a continuation! (My over-use of exclamation marks is my way of showing you how frustrating this ending is... brilliant, but frustrating :P)
I love the story, even though there are a few grammatical errors. You've written the story so well, that I really just don't care, xD
(I think the errors are more the kind you make when you have an idea and you just can't stop writing to save your life. My ex-boyfriend use to do that, and when he asked me to proof-read it, I couldn't make heads-or-tails of what he'd written. You are obviously a much better writer than him... )
So, yeah... great story! I would love to read an outtake of some Sterek citrus-y fun sometime, hehe

Such a beautiful story. Love it! :)