This was an amazing story! I love the honesty in the last few lines.

Amazing story!

You suck at spelling. No offense or anything.

excellent

At first I was all sad but then in the car ride I was like screaming "GO JOEY!" My mom walked in and was like why the hell Are you screaming and I was like "why bother trying to understand something you'll never get anyways" and she just looked at me and was like, "your watching anime again huh" and I was like sure mom, sure. But the point I'm making here is that this story was amazing, just like all your others

You have a couple of spelling errors. Weak not week and is Trough suppose to be taught?

I just wanted to say this is a great story and a very inspiring message to anyone that has attempted or contemplated suicide. It might seem like the easy way out and sometimes your pain may make you take for granted the good things in your life that make living worth it. But no matter how dark it gets we all have to remember there is always a light.

you covered a difficult topic with realism and some finesse, too. you always try to end on a hopeful note, and that is one of the things i really like about your writing. :)

this fic was a good way to add to your experience as a writer. thanks for all the effort you put into the things you post here.

I agree with Joanther, this story is very well written-aside from a few grammatical errors-but the ending is a little accelerated regarding Kaiba's and Joey's relationship.

I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and was sort of hoping there would be more. This is the kind of story that can be taken apart and written out in more details and given more chapters. Maybe even some chapters about Joey's recovery in the hospital and talking to a psychologist, maybe even his full recovery after he's out.

This could be a really inspirational story if it was a little deeper in those aforementioned details. Perhaps in the future, you'll decide to take this story and make it longer. For this reason, I'm going to subscribe to this story. :)

Hope I was helpful and I'd like you to know I really enjoyed the story. Well done.

That was beautiful

Amazing:) I loved it!

I like the way Joey didn't ran out all of his depress even after he and Kaiba admitted their feeling for each other. After all, Serenity had a special place in his heart, he couldn't just forget all about her death just because of Kaiba. I love that fact. :D

However I think the end of this story is a little bit too fast. I feel unsatisfiable and lack of something and I have hoped it would be longer. But this is still a good story. :"D

I love it!