He's so lucky she didn't kick his ass... Very enjoyable.

Nice job momo I also read ur other stories like moments and others so keep up the good work and good luck you are ma fav writer and bashabuttonstories of course anyway nice material keep it m8 :D

Not gonna lie, the detail and the idea of this story is unique, I loved it, and you also made it adorable, well done, though would have liked to see the friends comments and reactions of Asuna ordeal.

Excellent. Absolutely Excellent. A few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that, really well written. Should you decide to make a sequel, you can count on me to read it.

I was up for an hour reading this, it made my day/ night! Keep up the AMAZING stuff, I loved it!thank you!

YYYAAAAAYY! KiritoxAsuna! OMG, this is so cuuute! Just, I don't think they'd have been THAT scared at the Haunted House. But otherwise, I love this story!

I liked the story very much and great detail with the scenery and mood. I like how you used imagery to make the story a lot better. GREAT JOB, Keep up the great work.
Con- The story took too long to make it to the problem

Awww that's adorable and considering it Halloween tomorrow it's a great fit for my Halloween mood haha but seriously I love this story xxxxx

KAWAIIIIII! THIS STORY WAS SO CUTE I LOVED IT SO MUCH XD XD XD

Awww, that was so cute (weird for a guy to say that but it's true). Anyways keep up the good work your Kirisuna fics are some of my favorites. :D

Damn! That was great man! Good job :)

Man, I really loved this one-shot. I finally watched SAO not too long ago and it's become one of my favorite animes. Kirito and Asuna are a great couple with amazing chemistry, and you kept that chemistry in tact with this story. I liked how feisty Asuna got a couple times when Kirito would joke with her, and the haunted house was pretty cool, with a few rather funny moments involving Asuna getting scared. I liked the appearances of Agil, Silica, Lisbeth and Klein, as well as everyone's choices in costumes. And the ending was a great way for Kirito to make it up to Asuna for causing her to faint, and it got him another kiss :)

Great one-shot story momoxtoshiro. Kirito and Asuna were in character and I loved how you portrayed their relationship, as well as the whole Halloween setting for the story. You just got a new favorite :)

nice. That was really good.

Make more I swear I forgot to do my homework and all that because of this...ehh it was worth it,but thank u for this amazing story,make another one,about Christmas though please

It was amazing . As being a giant fan of SAO , having another story like that , come to life before me was truly appalling and amazing . keep writing ! I loved it (:
-Christian