Obsessed with this story. I love it so much and wish there was more to read :( just re-read again and I love your Jasper so much! And your Peter :D

I love these sort of fanfictions because, firstly, Bella is with Jasper, not Edward. That's a biggie. Then because Bella is so more carefree and Jasper is... more carefree to i guess, in a way.
But really, what Edward did there was just sick. Like psycho stalker sick.

I really like this story however it feels incomplete. it didn't fade to an end it just stopped at what felt like mid paragraph. I did like the humor, and characters. I also liked that Bella had more newborn tendency, not just the normal wake up and skipped over being a newborn. I like that she finally stood up to Alice and Edward, unconventionally but non the less she stood up. I think some of that anger towards them was because of how mad she was at them right before her accident and change.

Doesn't feel quite finished but oh you made me laugh!

A very god story. A would be very happy to read the rest of the story. I ended reading this story 5 may 2020.

I know it’s been years but I really hope you continue this!

I like your story but the continuous quotes and references to whatever tv show you were watching while writing this is sincerely grating my nerves. I could see if it was once every couple of chapters but damn...overkill. I get that you like firefly. Otherwise good story...slow plot progression but still good.

Ok seriously - it’s chapter 11 and I just feel you attention dragging this out. Ffs let Bella wake up.

ha ha ha h ha ha lol!

you saw that on True Blood or S.V.M.

trust Emmett to spoil the moment.

i bet Rose had been waiting to punch edward for years!

JFC this Bella is a selfish pain in the ass! Stop disfiguring your family and acting like everyone owes you something, you fucking brat!

Well written, you're so good at making her aggravating!

I soooooo enjoyed this. But it ended rather abruptly sniff sniff Can we expect an Epilogues?

Loved it. But who bit Bella initially?!