awesome story. i don't feel like going for reading the sequal tho. bye bye. nice story

How could you just kill Red like that!? He's an amazing character and I nearly cried at the hospital scene... Nearly.
And I've been wondering about a couple of things... Like why Red decide to kill himself? Sorry if the answer was obvious, but I just could figure out what went wrong... Was it because of Touko, his past, or something entirely different? Because I couldn't figure out what went wrong...
Another question, why were the Pokemon in the beginning acting all ill? You never really explained that throughout the story... And for a while I was pretty confused.

Anyways it was an amazing story an I enjoyed it greatly. You should make a sequel! And I think that you should write it in Red's point of view throughout the story before he died. That would spice things up a bit. Well that's what I think you should do... So if you ever decide to actually make a sequel, I think it should be based on Red's point of view before he died. Any who, good luck and keep up the good work

Damn! Despite how short this sort of was it still had my interest!

Aww that's sad! :( But despite that I love this chapter!

AWW! Red's so shy and adorable and wonderful! *dies of the fluffiness*

AWW! Red got a date XD

Don't worry!

It was a good chapter for a long wait. Update.

Wow how conflicting this chapter was.

Finally a new chapter
keep it up!

Good chapter. Update!

This is interesting, and Red seems cold in character.

Wow I'm glad to know you update at least! I'm happy with that!

Don't worry your not the only one!

Great chapter. Sometimes though you miss capitalizing.