Why did you stop here? It's so frustrating... This story is so great...

Oh. This story is beautiful. I do wish you had kept going. Hopefully, this will inspire you after all these years. My friends and i have rewatched the movies and reread the books. And now we are back to fanfiction. They have read this as well. I hope you still are an active member.

Your writing and storytelling is incredible. I’m sad this isn’t complete but I’m also okay with it. So hopeful!

I have to keep going, but needed to tell you that was beautiful and sad

25 in an eleven year old's body would be an actual nightmare. Poor Lucy needs many hugs

I adore this story. You have a way with words that is hypnotic. Thank you so very much for sharing!

this is a very good story. I would love to know what happens next. please update again soon.

this is a very good story. I would love to know what happens next. please update again soon.

i really loved the story.. the way you presented lucy.. edmund and casipian... and this is the best lucian story ever.. i love it so much... i know i do.. and please you should not leave the story abandoned.. please..

I love the story and the little story in the story! Update soon! Love your work!

I think you should put Caspian and Lucy together as a couple and then let them get married and let them be happy and let Lucy become pregnant later on when she is a adult please. Plus let the Star daughter fall in love with Edmund and let Edmund fall in love with her and let Edmund stay in Narnia just like Lucy and let Aslan let them stay in Narnia please. Also let Edmund and the Star daughter get married and have children later on please. Plus let Caspian be faithful to Lucy same with the Star daughter to Edmund please.

I love this story so much. Please please please update soon. I need to know what happens next. This story is so wonderful.

This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read! Please continue updating it, I can't wait to see how it turns out!

This is absolutely wonderful! I adore your characterisation of Lucy. So many make her this naive little girl, forgetting she was an adult in the Golden Age. I like as well that you show she already had romantic experience before meeting Caspian and in some ways the glimpses we've had of her relationship with Toric are even more interesting than her so far one sided one with Caspian; actually I would love to see you write that as a full story.

I really hope you get round to finishing this sometime.

I love this story! Will you ever update it? I have read it several times, and i wish to have an ending. Nothing is worse then a good story that is not complete. Please?