other Enforcer guy.

Well, that was hella fun. I particularly enjoyed the characterization and how far Prowl and Jazz were willing to go for one another. The ending was hugely satisfying.

awesome!

Aww I thought it was Hot Rod, but I guess that wouldn't make any sense xD Amazing story, it really got me thinking. For a moment, I was scared that Jazz might be going insane after all. Good thing the mechformer's the real culprit. I love your characterization of Jazz and Prowl, they are both very realistic, and their reactions and pain is so blatant I can almost feel it. Even the other bots in the story are all in character. Really good job!

*slow clap* wow.. Just WOW. I've always loved your stories. But this one is so satisfying and well ended. The amount of trust, love, mystery. Ahh thank you!

I truly thought that Tumbler was just the 'old' Chromedome for a long while until you described his paintjob as blue.

A great story, a wonderful mystery, and a few twists that managed to stay coherent and understandable. I really really really enjoyed this ! I also feel a little inspired to do something similar for a fanfic, thank you for posting this!

Had to read the whole thing in one sitting.. Had me baffled till the end. Thanks for a good TF story and a good mystery.

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Gorgeous, as always. Unfortunately I only realized Blip was the killer when he started to talk in a more insane manner to Prowl... Clearly I have no talents or practice xD

Not often I find fic with plot here :D Loved this, and loved that it kept me guessing. Thanks for posting. :)

Great story, loved it! And what a relief that Jazz wasn't the real culprit, you had me worried there for a while. Wonderful ending! *joins the clapping*

Adorable. I'm not usually the crime/mystery type, but this was good. Thanks for sharing.

I must admit, after reading the first chapter I hat to let other stuff be and read on! great story!

I must say i love your work. You make them both quite believable and the plot is very well done.

I loved this. :) It was a great mystery story to read during a Saturday afternoon for me.

Lovely story, I hope that you will write more Prowl/Jazz stories in the future because if they are as good as this one then I will love to read them.