My head was screaming, YOU CALL THIS TOEING THE LINE?

I doubt you’re on here anymore, but if you are I’d love a way to get to the good stuff! I tried the link and it isn’t working for me. Could be after all this time it’s not available. Anyway, fingers crossed over here! Pwetty pwease?

This chapter was really good, but I was bawling my eyes out as soon as Fred was mentioned haha
I've really loved this fanfic so far, it's pure gold :)

I wanted to let you know that this is absolutely amazing. I was wondering if I could be a beta reader? I could edit as well as make suggestions. I am sure that you probably already have beta readers, but I would like to help you on your journey to becoming a novel writer or whatever it is you want to be. i wanted to say something, but I forgot. Anyway, I am going to look at your stories! I can't wait to read them!

OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! THIS TOOK ME AT LEAST 3 WEEKS TO READ! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! THIS IS AMAZING!

Also, I had an idea for an M(?) rated short story. What if Harry almost drowned in the great lake and Draco, being an oh so amazing swimmer dived in after him and then Harry, seeing Draco struggling, saved Draco and himself and then did CPR, which turned into shagging when Draco was revived. Then, Draco was attacked by other students and Harry acting as the top, saved Draco, but in the bedroom, which they somehow went to, Harry was a bottom and Draco topped. Maybe in the ROR(room of requirement)? And then Draco and Harry found out about Pansy and Hermione shagging, who had found out about Ron and Blaise shagging? And it turns out that Pansy and Blaise were good guys, with Pansys and Blaises parents being evil, expecting them to marry each other, and Dracos parents expecting him to marry Astoria Greengrass. But the couples work out in the end. And Luna and Ginny together. That could be a plot layout.

Maybe(M rated, i guess): Harry walk into the ROR, where Draco was wanking to Harry, and Draco didnt notice him come in, and Harry finds this the hottest thing ever, and rushes over to start shagging him and stroking him or something? Then they fall into a rhythm of going into the ROR to shag, but something dramatic happens, like Ginny, being a jealous little b!tch, kisses Harry and Draco thought he was cheating, but Ginny ends up either being shunned by everyone, or with Luna after she says sorry and explains everything. Then Harry and Draco shag more than ever, and hot stuff happens and they do it.

Holy shit they murdered her pet! Jesus

Just finished chapter 24 and $ %# %& ! That was lovely. This will be my last of your published fics so please write more if the inspiration strikes!

Yours,
Loony Luiny

I realize quite a few years have passed since this was written, but is the Google Docs dodge really necessary? I've read quite a few fanfics on this site that were much more explicit than the sex scenes here, and they seem to have passed whatever Snape-level censor is prudishly opposed to such things. It's only that it's a bother having to switch to a different site entirely for something so utterly engaging :) I love this particular work SO MUCH.

Damn. I've never been one to read fanfiction. But I was missing the Wizarding World something fierce. I was always into the idea of Draco and Harry, and for my first fanfiction read, this was beyond anything I expected. My heart is so full right now.

Amazing writing, and I've save this novel for future rereads.

I love this fic, it has me randomly bursting out with laughter from Draco’s sarcasm.

I want to read the sexy time scenes bit I don't know how and I refuse to read any more of this brilliant fic before I figured out how!

Help please how do you do Google docs?!

I love love loved it! So beautiful. An emotional rollercoaster. Thank you.

This is the ninth time I’ve read this. I seriously fucking love this. Just wanted you to know. You’re so amazing.

This is too damn fine. I’ve only just found this, years after you wrote it, but it’s one of the best fictions I’ve had the pleasure of reading. If you check this story and read this review, know that your story has given me immense enjoyment, and I thank you for it