| Reviews for Childhood Innocence |
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   GoodGodHenry chapter 1 . 1/14/2017 Great first chapter |
| Hekka chapter 12 . 1/12/2015 I started reading this story because summary seemed promising. But it's painfully obvious that my expectations are not met: all your characters are terrible out of characters and all of them - with the exception of mean to be five years old (but sounds like he's actually older on two years) Coulson, time to time - clearly lacking intellectual level, which their originals has. |
| KelticKitten chapter 39 . 10/27/2014 this was a very excellently composed story. I think I only saw two or three typos, tops throughout the whole thing, and that is amazing! Your characters were spot on and you really captured their voices. |
| MomotsukiNezumi chapter 38 . 10/28/2013 Okay, Peggy getting de-aged so she can be with Steve is actually quite adorable. Loki being de-aged is REALLY adorable! |
| MomotsukiNezumi chapter 34 . 10/28/2013 Okay, if I didn't know that Loki was going to come back, my heart wouldn't have been able to put itself back together after his death scene. Poor Phil's really upset over this... |
| MomotsukiNezumi chapter 29 . 10/28/2013 The desk attendant...she reminded me of Trawlaney. Was that a Harry Potter reference you slipped in? |
| MomotsukiNezumi chapter 5 . 10/28/2013 Ok, that settles it: Mini-Coulson/Phil is ridiculously adorable! Captain America, meet your tiniest fan! |
| deleted2017 chapter 37 . 9/12/2013 :) Ok, glad he's back. And REALLY that Loki's back, I think I cried once or twice there... Yeah, just a few time. Loved this story, |
| deleted2017 chapter 34 . 9/12/2013 Wow. I had my doubts, but now I am convinced. YOU TRUELY ARE EVIL. how could you kill Loki?! -bursts into tears- |
| deleted2017 chapter 31 . 9/11/2013 :') Ok, I think that chapter 31 is the best yet. :) Awesome! |
| deleted2017 chapter 29 . 9/11/2013 Eheheh, I think that I figured out who the desk attendant was. Tell me, do you read percy Jackson...? |
| deleted2017 chapter 27 . 9/11/2013 Mr. Rogers neighbourhood flowers, cause... YOLO. LMFAO! :) |
| deleted2017 chapter 26 . 9/11/2013 They bought that? ROFL! Ok,this Is awesome. This is great. |
| deleted2017 chapter 12 . 9/10/2013 Eheheh. I loved when Loki attempts to read breaking dawn. :) This is a fantastic story. I love the way that you portrayed Coulson as a kid, and I love how Loki is All tied up in the plot. |
| deleted2017 chapter 5 . 9/10/2013 Love this! (And your picture. It was what originally drew me in) |
