Thank you for this story ! ! !

It's nice, but some detail would do good. Also, try to introduce and transition a bit more smoothly. I've places in this story where you can add some history to explain what the characters are saying. Treat them as two individuals who are in love. I would think that they have memories. Put some flashbacks.

It turned out awesomely. There little fight made it so much cuter. I really, really liked it.

holy. fucking. shit! that was amazing! my mother scared the crap out of me halfway through though. thank god im in the corner of the room

I find then so cute when they are together. I can't stop reading about them.

Great Story! Really enjoyed it since this is the first time ever that I have read a story about this couple, and I loved it. Congrats!3 :D

Wow, hot! That's the first fanfic I've read of Merthur and you got their characters so well! ;)

FAN!

Absolutely loved it. It was perfect. Thank you for writing it _

i love it!

well damn. not the first time I've read male and male, but this was definitely interesting. Merlin isn't my favorite show in the world, but Arthur is hot as hell and Merlin's pretty cute himself. I just can't stand the show. Loved the details you put into this though, funny how Merlin walked in on Arthur and how things turned out. Good one shot.

Absolutely loved it!

it's great XD

Love it! Hadn't read Merthur in a long time. Great job.

that was hot