What? The end? WHAT DO YOU MEAN "THE END"? ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR CORN-FED MIND!? YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT!

Can you please, pretty please, write a sequel? I have to know what's going to happen with those vials! :/

Liked this.

Just goes to prove you can't trust Kirk.

Great story, well done and thanks.

omg brilliant! will there be more in this verse? a sequel perhaps? * super hopeful*

such an amazing story. thanks so much for writing this and sharing it here! 3

great story!

Sequel. Is. A. Must.

There is no 'if' about it.

This was awesome :D

i think i saw doom about 6 years ago and i'll be honest this fic. gave me shivers, in two ways , anticipation( for what bones/reaper was going to do when he appeared) and fear of the monsters( that those things scared the hell out of me in the movie).
so overall excellent fic. i was most pleased to be able to read such a well put-together fic. but i will say i'm pretty pissed at jim for that ending, all i keep thinking is 'he's doomed them all' and 'bones is gonna be beyond pissed off if he ever finds out'.
uh i think that's it thanks again for the good read.
Ps. oh and if you ever feel like writing more trekkie/doom fic.s i will so be there to r&r.

Kind of mad, because I typed up a pretty little review for Chap 1 and it seems it never showed up. I also can't remember what I wrote so you'll have to content yourself with knowing it was positive.

I like the no-nonsense McCoy in this chapter, but I think my favorite bit is what didn't happen: nobody interrogated him then and there because there are more important things going on, like not dying. But it was in the background though, since it can't just be ignored. Very well done.

I'm wondering how much action we'll see, if there's only one baddie. Not like a video game with its oodles of killing spree, but I'm hopeful for something creative to fit these circumstances instead.

Oh please continue. As much as i like Bones/McCoy fics with an OC attached as a sparse as a they are I do like what you've got here. McCoy going back to do what he can to get rid his demons.

Very excited to see a new Reaper!Bones fic pop up. I wonder how much the situation will deteriorate? And i like the chapter ending, very suspenseful.

I was also pleased to see the scene of finding Sarge's remains. A lot of the Doomverse fics don't elaborate on the grief of returning to Olduvai, just the horror. I hope to see a little more of that.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Enjoying this! Just a bit of confusion though. Your profile says its a completed repost, but this is obviously not done. Are you just posting over time? Can't wait to see more.