cute and funny

I just love James bad timing.

Oh, this is brilliant! I giggled my way through this, enjoying the easily elegant way that you write the speech of these two characters. It made my day :)

Awhhh, Haa, That Was Actually Very Sweet x

That was sooooo adorable! I love the explanation for why James asked Lily out while taunting Snape - it makes that event much more understandable and it sets it up nicely for the "bad timing" with the proposal. The characterization was great, and I love their banter :)

nice one-shot! :)

Ah ma gad
But um you made a mistake because James is actually going to marry me so..yano.
Nah, loved it!

That was SO CUTE! You should've seen the insane smile on my face as I read it. It was so funny, and cute, and in character... I love the way Lily doesn't like ALL of him perfectly (the smirk). And their jokiness - they are so compatible!

NAAAAWWWWWHH!