This is great. The part about the ships made me laugh, Is it bad I prefer the canon ships? I'm too much of a hinny shipper I guess. Also i love Luna so I'm happy to see this latest development. I love your potrayal of Harry, it's really well written.

A confirmation she's a Mary sue I guess. This is really good!

Charming detention slips? I never thought of that. That's brilliant! This fic looks great.

This is horrifying yet hilarious. The OC actually seems to have good intentions, which makes it all the more scary...

dun dun dun!
and then I skipped to chapter 4, and unheard the first line of my review!

Hilariously funny in parts , and lovely Luna of course is unaffected by the madness around her ...

While this is a well written story with an interesting plot, the plot seems much to complicated and you seem to have lost interest in writing further. Therefore i suggest you think about writing a short end, such as : The Sue suddenly understands the errors of her way. Or she travels to the future. Or Sirius falls in love with her and she leaves the others alone.
Just write one more chapter to get an ending and finish this story please o.o
Yes?
:-)

Well, dang. Another great story you've abandoned. I am bummed out. :(

Man, this is the best thing EVER. I know it's dead, but I can't help hope just a little that you'll continue it one day. :)

Is this dead? This is a really good concept, and I'd like to see what else you do with it!

Delightful chapter. Love the way Snape used his Special Muggle Powers of Thumping to take out Lockhart. Not to mention Boggart Lily.

Although there's one song that Luna could have sung that would have been *worse* for the Boggarts...it begins 'It's a world of laughter, a world of tears..."

After all, to any Mary Sue, it's always a small world.

(shudder)

Then again, Gildylocks and Mary Sue were *made* for each other.

"loop of his braid"-oh, dear, this is a new development, and I suspect nobody, nobody at all is going to mention it to Snape.

And I suspect that Snape will also order several gross of SpectreSpecs.

this is one of the best things ive read and i cant stop snorting at snape's long-ass braid 10/10 best crack god bless and thank you

Nooo, why did this never get finished? This story is brilliant! It even got its own TV Tropes page! Anyway, I absolutely loved this. The ridiculousness of it was delightful and the way it played on the horrible Mary Sue stereotypes was phenomenal. I might actually borrow elements of this for a story I've considered writing for a long time. Not this fandom though. I hope you'll find it within yourself to complete it one day. :)

Shudders at what happened to Slytherin. Yes, Cedric Diggory is all sparkly...

But those are some good detention slips!