I'm sorry was this really a Stiles/Lydia story becouse from begining to end it's been i love Jackson.
I'll always love Jackson, i can't stop loving Jackson and the ending was such a dissapointment Stiles should have never ended up with Lydia in this story.

This is really good but, I f**king hate Lydia! She is an indecisive b**ch! Its obvious that Stiles is the better choice! I mean Jackson? Really? He's a d**k to her and everyone else!

Nice starting chapter mate. Well writing and enjoyable. Going to keep reading.

oh that was a gorgeous ff . I realy loved it ! *_* sometimes in the middel of the Story i was like "Whow no no no why ?" but then tere were this Moments wen i just sad to my self "Yes this is how i want it to be !" so all in all a very very very good Story and very good writing .

REALY COUDNT STOP READING ! LOVE IT *_*

i love this story and i love how you ended it :)

Perfect ending!

So sad please continue

This was so freaking good! I loved it

This fic mostly frustrated me, didn't seem like Stiles and Lydia at all. I felt bad for Stiles throughout the entire thing, he's too good for Lydia. I love Stiles and Lydia together but this just frustrated me. Yes it's true that people will always have a place for their first love in their hearts but when it doesn't work out, they end up finding greater love. Good example would be Peter Parker, Gwen Stacy and Mary Jane Watson.

So Lydia pining over and always going back to Jackson like that was horrible and made no sense when she admitted to herself that Stiles was the better man. And she even admitted that what she felt for Stiles felt different and better than what she felt for Jackson but that was a couple chapter back and she was still pining and going after Jackson. I don't like Jackson, he is one of my least favourite characters in the show.

Stiles is so incredibly sweet, anyone would be lucky to have him.

I was hoping this fic would be more about Stiles trying to get over Lydia and her chasing after him for a change. Instead, he was still pining over her and not moving on at all. I would have loved to see more jealous Lydia and more Stiles/Allison and Stiles/Erica. Honestly, if nothing else you made me like Stiles and Allison together, i loved that she had a crush on him.

But yeah this fic frustrated and annoyed me for the most part, no offense. And yes the first couple chapters were hard to read because there was no spacing and separating of dialogue.

Interesting beginning. I am liking how this is going so far. I really think that for them to be a believable couple on the show, they will have to become friends first. So kudos to you.

Perfect ending to a perfect story

wow ! so cute and great ! i loved the end it was great XD

Oh my god, that last chapter broke my heart. I love this story!

Heartbreaking chapter!

Great filler!
If your struggling with writers block (which I know can be a massive pain), maybe a suggestion would help? Maybe Stiles and Lydia come to this big confrontation with one another and Lydia finally snaps and tells him he cant keep pushing her away and it basically ending in Lydia telling him how she feels? :)