Some typos are ok, since humans are not perfect. That is understandable. But you don’t even know the difference between your and you’re! For f sake...it’s soemthing taught in grade school! Learn!

Well written and interesting fic, specially loved the power couple concept

The male protagonist is unrealistic as he was once a Death Eater.

It's nice to see how much Draco knows about hermione but kind of sad to see how little her friends know. Great chapter!

Wow so taking out the informant is big. Great chapter!

Well their nice and calm evening is shot. Too bad about that dinner though it sounded delicious. Great chapter!

Ok so things just went from 0-100 real quick. Great chapter!

Okay so what is Kingsley decision going to be. Plus, it almost seems like Hermione doesn't really like Harry and Ron all that much. Which is understandable considering all that is going on. Great chapter!

Aw they are getting closer. Too bad they have the tagalongs of Harry and Ron. But maybe that'll push them to be closer. Great chapter!

Well damn looks like Draco might be wanting more than a purely professional relationship with hermione. Great chapter!

Interesting start! :)

Wow. This seems really interesting! I can't wait to read more. Great chapter!

You really need to relearn possessive vs. plural tenses. It's almost as if you either never learned it (which you should have) or you've forgotten how to use spellcheck. Your work is sloppy...good story line but very sloppy. Take some pride in yourself and at least run a frakking spellcheck before posting

Interesting.

Lots going on