really great story; enjoying it so much!

I don’t know if it was intended, but the praise for the visual imagery you can create can’t be put into words.

I don’t know if it’s the current me, that makes this story so much better (as opposed to my first read through), or something else, but I appreciate it

From a quick scroll through your favorited stories (the only way I know, how to find out activeness), I am uncertain if you’re still there, but from reading your bio,
Wish you all the best :) (and a continuation lol)

So for one, this made me incredibly sad, but for the other, purely logical speaking, a Hyuuga (potentially Uchiha) should’ve detected her one of those times.

Her chakra‘s color is an unusual orange, and she‘s the only person who has that.
(Super realistically, Konoha is a ninja village, it’s probably only ~20k-ish big, too, nevertheless, this story is so great, that being a sucker for details is gladly thrown out of the window.)

Woah, this is awesome

I have cried my eyes out for the past two hours and you would have my eternal gratitude if you were to update this story.

I without any ounce of shame cried reading this fic. Pity it's on hiatus but hopefully will be completed

i don't know of you still checking the review from this story but I just wanna say thank you for written this because it's so beautiful and I don't know why maybe it's about how you described every characters feeling or how you arranged such a beautiful sentences or etc I don't know it just so deep and great. you make the OC so likeable and you made me feel naruto's pain and how the events influenced her became who she is, as a wise young girl. all of the relationship between the characters... ugh it's felt so real and I love how you picture the bad side of ninja world that should be taken seriously. this story is amazing. thank you for writing it!

Your poem is Amaz-balls:) I loe the plot and story! I was a tab bit confused at the beginning but I understand more now C: Love u

LOVE LOVE LOVE 3

What Is a village? Who are they protecting by becoming loyal to it? Madara and Hashirama created konoha so children did not have to fight and have a proper childhood. The way I see it, neither Naruto or Sasuke have any reason to fight for the village. The hokage who makes desicion to protect the minority, mainly civilian. Minato, who destroy Naruto future and happiness for the sake of nothing. What you said is completely true.

Wow, just... wow.

I haven't been hit so hard in my feelings in a long while, I loved this story.

Now that I finsihed it, I'm not sure if I admire or hate the Naruto of this story, I certainly wouldn't be able to think like her. In any case, this lovely piece of work managed to rattle me something fierce, since that was probably the point, good job!

Your story is like a poem- or maybe a song- that always seems to be sad and end sadly, no matter how happy it seems at times. I dont understand how Inoichi lied with his smile. Though i can see how lucky Ino is.
Does Naruto realise that Minato is her dad? Because it seems like it does.

Breathlessly readable, I long for more of this.

Sad but true is what sarutobi said