Well thanks ... I spend almost 3 hrs reading this fanfic ... just to feel horrible ...
But the you portray paul character pretty well...

This tore me apart... I've not read the story this one is a prequel to so I wasn't prepared... You described everything so beautifully... I'm going straight to read the sequel now even though it's 1:30am because I'm completely hooked... Well done for such an amazing piece of writing.

I cried for hours after reading this. my parents think i have gone insane . but, nice story

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I don't know what say, but...
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!
And to the Buttons guy who has too much time on his damn hands, KEEP YOUR BURNING THOUGHTS TO YOURSELF! I also found out that you are an Advanceshipper, and THESE ARE THE REASONS WHY I HATE THEM AND THAT SHIPPING BECAUSE THEY ALWAYS HAVE TO BE NEGATIVE! YOU ARE A DISGRACE TO THE ADVANCESHIPPING SOCIETY!

this story really made me cry...seriously!
great story

I rarely review fics, but this was just... wow. Paul made me so annoyed at the times and I could really feel Dawn's pain at being neglected all the time. I was actually expecting it to lead to a happy ending, so when Paul died I was pretty shocked myself... I love angst but I can't help feeling a sense of something missing :/ Like Paul should have at least had a chance to tell Dawn he loved her and to show her his affectionate side, just once. To your credit, this fic probably wouldn't have made such a huge impact on me if you wrapped it up with Paul telling Dawn how he really felt. But I still can't shake the feeling of 'incompleteness' this gave me...

Darn, I'm really conflicted now. Darn you and amazing writing skills. I'm gonna find some fluff to read now to cheer myself up.

My eyes were watering by the end. You almost made me cry while reading fanfiction. Definitely an impressive achievement, so that's awesome! *goes off to cry*

It was good but Drew?Waving?Caring?Nope,you probably should of put "and how romantic their husbands were".That's how I see it.

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I know Paul is indifferent, but...he didn't deserve it... :'(

How petty can a person get to devote themselves to bringing an artist down just to defend a 'higher opinion'. What pisses me off about this guy is that he's complaining about Pokemon fanfiction. Seriously! Who the fuck cares. I like this stuff, but I'm not starting some movement.
Don't listen to these assholes. There is some real constructive negative criticism that will come your way, but don't let idealistic spammers like these bring you down.

TTTT I'm literally crying. And my mom thinks I'm crazy because I didn't tell her that I cried cuz of this... P-P-Paul... WAAAAH!

Wow, you did succeed in making him in character very well! Way to go! That's no easy feat!

I'm no enormous fan of Ikarishipping, but this fic was beautiful.
And to Mr Buttons, flush your bullshit down the toilet. I don't think you get the point of Shippings. They are simply people's opinions on couples. And there is hardly any 'obvious' ship in the anime. Get your facts right.

Oh my God...this was stunningly beautiful. This was amazing, I have no words to describe what I am feeling.
Oh yes, and to the reviewer MrButtons: Yes, you may have your opinion about Ikarishipping, but if you didn't notice, SHIPPINGS ARE OPINIONS! How the hell did shipping come to be then? PEOPLE HAVING OPINIONS ABOUT THE CHARACTERS. I checked every single one of The biggest ikarishipping Fan's stories, YOU'VE FLAMED ALL OF THEM. Oh yeah, with the EXACT SAME THING. If I flamed (which I absolutely never, ever, will do) I would NOT say the same thing over and over. That's just pure laziness. If you're trying to get a point across, just do it with one long-ass review and get it over with, FINALLY LEAVING THE BIGGEST IKARISHIPPING FAN ALONE! Sure, you say a few little different things, but seriously. God, I just feel bad for The biggest ikarishipping Fan because they have to put up with all your bullshit. If I were them, I would have probably reported your comments already, but The biggest ikarishipping Fan was smart and realized not to do that, but to leave them up so the world could see what an ill-mannered person you are. I give kudos to them for that, it's a smart thing to do.
Overall, The biggest ikarishipping Fan, your writing is amazing and phenomenal, so do not heed such an impolite person's words. (:

I hated the story. It was absolutely awful, and I think Paul and Dawn shouldn't be together. This is just my opinion. And you can delete my review, report it and see if I care. But I'm just standing for what I think is right. Not fair that the most obvious shipping, well an obvious duh there, is covered with a lie that others are better than that.

Well, I might as well go get some toilet paper and wipe the sorry excuses for author's down my ass. Because that's what most of you are worth, people that like ikari. Shit.