Ok, I was really confused last chapter, because it seemed like it was for a while different story, but now I understand. And yay! Ace isn't as much of an ass hole as we thought! Also wow, lots of couples in this. And lmbo! That scene with Kidd and Law reminded me of the corset scene from Kuroshitsuji.

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Nice chapter! Seems like your grammar has improved. Also, how old are Luffy and Ace? I'm having trouble visualizing how they look like. Did I miss something?

oh yes... this was an awesome chapter, with Kid and Penguin when I was first reading it I was like "uh...?" (blushes) but it was really funny! then with Ace and Marco I love the whole scene, wonderful hun! with Zor and Sanji I love how Sanji felt like crying, and how Zoro was acting, and lastly Law! omg Law is just priceless in this chapter!
I so can't wait for the next one to come out! please let it be soon!

I love this story! Please update soon!

-_-where's my chapter? I was promised a chapter. Chapter!#! (Luv ya lolz)

can't wait for a chapter to come out, and glad to hear your doing good!

Yay! I am so glad you are back! I really like this story so please keep it up! Oh, and congratulations on how you are doing better .

I don't know if you'll like me for what I'll say, but I'll say it anyway with what I hope is tact:

Luffy is awfully young for getting drunk and kissing girls three years older than him. I mean, growing up with lots of guy friends (and a big brother), at 13, they were no way near Luffy's behaviour! And this child neglect to leave a 13 year old to fend for himself, I highly doubt that Garp (since the setting is in our universe and his grandsons haven't inhuman strength) would leave his youngest without a caretaker after Makino left! Even Makino would've had the sense to search for one...
I won't even start about Ace's suicidal thoughts after his girlfriend dumped him... I mean, he knew her for what? Few weeks? It's way too OOC, Ace would say "fuck it" and find someone else worthy of him...

I don't want to sound like a bitch, really, I'm not flaming you or anything... It's just that I'm confused by all the unrealistic facts/holes in the plot.

Anyway, sorry if I offended you or came as mean (English is not my first language), I just wanted to voice my opinion, since reviews are also here so that authors can get better at what they're doing!

So glad to see that you're back! Can't wait for the new chapters ;D

Great story! I really like your writing!

Well, I've read this chapter on mobile phone and to tell you the truth, I'm kinda lost on the story because it'shard to read in mobile. Hahahaha! Don't worry, I'll reread it on computer! I can say that this chapter is very pretty naughty and they let themselves get loose on the club. I like your idea of switching law and kid's friends. Well, looking forward for the next chapter! I hope to see more of ace and luffy! :-)

gtreat chapter

Hahaha that was a marvolous update laughed a lot and thought that everything was amazing I can't wait till your next update!

I'm really glad to hear getting better, and I love what your doing with the story! can't wait for more!