| Reviews for What makes you most happy? |
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  Jaws chapter 7 . 3/27/2015 I declare this shark... Jumped. |
 RealRemainder chapter 7 . 5/27/2013 -THERE ARE SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW- Hmmm... I'm... divided... On one hand it has a lot of good parts... Faithful to the characters (most good Fanfiction of Evangelion involves giving Shinji a spine, but this manages to stay faithful just because it was truth or dare instead of "Let's kiss"), the moments of Shinji and Asuka don't seem forced(Asuka's crisis of conciousness made me cringe bacause I actually believed she would act like that) and overall nice story On the other hand it has a short attention span, short development at some points and I feel the flow of the story is kinda lacking... even if the story is good and believable... Well, I guess I'll just follow and see where it goes... |
| shadowrallen chapter 2 . 5/19/2013 asuka really needs to think before she speaks. |
| Arkfrost271 chapter 4 . 5/17/2013 gREAT CHAPTER VERY FUNNY. |
| Arkfrost271 chapter 3 . 5/17/2013 Good chapter liked that Asuka is feeling sad about what she did to Shinji. |
| Arkfrost271 chapter 2 . 5/17/2013 That was a sad chapter. Poor Shinji. Great work on this chapter. |
| Arkfrost271 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013 That was a very good first chapter. I liked it. :) |
| COBRASTEVE chapter 7 . 5/14/2013 I love how in character you are. Great job, but pregnant!? What? |
| Traitor of All Traitors chapter 7 . 5/11/2013 How'd she get pregnant anyway?! |
| johndoe91 chapter 4 . 5/10/2013 Okay, I was a bit confused there before it was revealed to be a dream. Very nice so far. |
| Frau Kaname Langley chapter 6 . 11/18/2012 More |
| Amsim chapter 6 . 11/17/2012 looking forward to the next chappy |
| SeductiveShigure chapter 5 . 10/4/2012 This was pretty good. A little confusing at times but the pace is nice. Can't wait for more! |
| ichigo suzuki chapter 5 . 10/3/2012 Please continue the story |
| SaltyJak chapter 4 . 9/27/2012 I really like the story so far as I have always liked fanfiction about this series and I also enjoy your writing style as it isn't clumped together like others I have read, finally I really hope you continue this as many other fanfictions start out good but then are left unfinished and forgotten which can really make one feel pessimistic for the chances of a good story but regardless good luck with this I really enjoy it so far. |
