A very different story. Tony should have taken off with Sarita. He could have had fame, fortune and a lot of fun. Besides, they make a cute couple.

This is a good story and I was completely entertained. Thank you for that.

Great writing.

awesome

You're a really good writer. I wish you were still writing ff. This story was like watching a movie.

Wow didn't think I would like this and ...I loved it.A lovely little you are still writing...lots of new stories I love your writing .

really really well done :)

I loved this story so much. Rock star Tony and Tony whump all combined. What's not to love?! Oh the awesomeness! xo

nice:-)

I've read several of your stories, and while they are excellently written and interesting, I feel like you go out of your way to always make the bad guy a Muslim. I understand that we see stereotypes more often than not, but it gets frivolous when even at one point in a different story, you mentioned a character had an Islamic accent. What does that even mean? That's like saying, he had a Catholic accent, which makes absolutely no sense. While you are a good author, some points do take away of its general effectiveness.

Loved it. At first I had trouble with Tony being sexually abused and I still have trouble wrapping my head around that. However I love the story, DiNozzo is my fav and you kept me very interested from beginning to end. Can't wait for more.
Sherry

Holy Mother Of Fucking Shit! POOR TONY! How Could Someone Do Something Like That! I Guess Some People Are Just Born Wrong! Abdullah & Amir Deserve To Rot In Hell. Abdullah For What He Did, & Amir For Trying To Kill Tony & Sarah For Killing Abdullah In Self Defense. & For Trying To Get Revenge For Abdullah, That Monster Doesn't Deserve Something As Noble As Revenge.

Holy Crap. What Is This Secret? Did They Kill Someone? Witness Someone Being Killed? What Could It Be? I Bet Gibbs' Will Figure It Out.

& Oh No. I Know What Plan Gibbs Is Thinking Of. He's Going To Have Tony Go On Stage & Play With Her Isn't He? That's Just Crazy Enough To Work! XD

Another great one :)
I love tony with all these beautiful powerful women you write. I like to think he ends up Sarah at the end.
And I can imagine him being a complete juvenile delinquent. Would love to read more stories bringing up those times

What a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it. Especially seeing it all played out in my head as I read it. And Tony a songwriter- I can see that.

Keep writing, esp stories with Tony.

Luv it!