Really good story

Great story!

Really enjoyed the story. Kept me involved and wanting more the entire time.

Great team work, ladies! Gripping tale.

The FBI must be pretty stupid if they think Tony's working with his father. Protective custody? Ha! They interrogated him, locked him up, and planned to use him as bait. And excuse me if I'm not shocked that he took the real chip when he left, seeing as the FBI's the one with a leak!

What a brilliant story! From beginning to end this story exceeded my expectations and the execution, plotting and characterization is far superior than any fan fiction I've ever read.

If you aren't already writing professionally, you really should be.

Thank you both for sharing your extraordinary gifts.

Okay. This is one hell of a story!
And I came here thinking: oh, just a little one shot. That's perfect before I'll head to bed. Three hours later I finally decided that I just could not continue because I had to re-read a lot and still forgott bits and pieces thanks to my sleeping brain -.-
So I had to read the last chapter now and I'm so happy that Tony and Gibbs are back to normal :)
And I would have loved to read how Gibbs accidently pushed Senior into a river, but I was quite content with him blown to pieces, and then you let him LIVE?! Why?

This story is absolutely incredible! The twists, suspense, and interactions between characters was amazing. And the bond between Gibbs and Tony, even with something like that lie between them, is unparalleled. Great writing, great story! But that ending was cruel! Ah! I hope there is a sequel to this. Anyway, great job! This is one of if not the best stories I've read.

I can not recommend this story enough (correct review. PLEASE ignore previous as i LOVE this story and it's authors)

Love your stories .Love a highly competent Tony I have read this before and I could not recommend this story how about a sequel ..SOON..ASAP. NOW..PLEASE

Wow. Very epic story. Couldn't put it down until I finished it.

Wow! What a ride. Congratulations to you both. It's a great story. I really, really enjoyed it. xo

Just got done reading this and enjoyed it immensely along with your other NCIS stories that I have read so far. Don't know if you plan on writing anymore since your last story was from near 2 years ago, but I was wondering if you were planning a sequel?

Great story from two wonderful writers. Thank you very much.

Interesting