Reviews for PokéHearts: The Chosen One's Fate And Destiny |
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Guest chapter 2 . 2/1/2019 Ash x Aqua never in my life I thought that would happen but... Dang. U r good. |
Guest chapter 21 . 10/15/2018 Don’t forget, it’s all about ash Ketchum and his story of how he met with the keyblade wielders. I want3d to see ash walked alone on his journey so he could meet w it’s other people. |
Evelyn1563 chapter 9 . 4/13/2018 ok |
Evelyn1563 chapter 8 . 4/13/2018 cool chapter |
Evelyn1563 chapter 6 . 4/13/2018 cool story |
Evelyn1563 chapter 3 . 4/13/2018 cool |
Evelyn1563 chapter 2 . 3/27/2018 coool |
Evelyn1563 chapter 1 . 3/26/2018 cool |
reborn101 chapter 22 . 9/22/2017 I don't like pairing with Ash x Rico. They are not the perfect couple. |
Zatch Bell-01 chapter 29 . 1/8/2017 How about Gravity Falls? It would be funny if Ash encounters weird things while he's in Gravity Falls, Oregon. |
Red Satoshi ketchum chapter 29 . 1/6/2017 from those worlds would any girl fell in love with Ash cause well know Korra and the lead female from RWBY are going to have a crush on him |
fanfic meister chapter 29 . 1/6/2017 Interesting |
Pokeevee57 chapter 29 . 1/6/2017 *nods* Great choice of worlds, can't wait! :D |
Gojiradon chapter 1 . 1/6/2017 Well, I hope things will go smoothly for the remake, if you remember an earlier suggestion I made, I'd really like to see a few of those ideas tested in this or other stories you may write in the future. I'd like to help out in some way, not as a beta-reader, because I won't do so well, so I figured I could be someone you can consult with for continuity in the remake, I am pretty good at keeping tabs on what's happened in the story, and in some ways, can keep track of a timeline. I think that is what often hampers a story to a degree where their authors don't have a coherent idea to avoid slip-ups like saying something happened before, despite it not really happening yet... |
WyrmTheFrostDragonSwordsman chapter 28 . 1/6/2017 Actually, I thought the Summoning Gems were a great support mechanic in his Quest. If this were made into a game, such a thing would have been detrimental to Gameplay, or Ash would not be Ash in addition to it being much more difficult. I agree that many Summonings in the Games were unnecessary, and a bit silly, but Ash was never the type to do things on his own, because he's always had Pokémon and two other trainers to back him up. Also, he's not Sora, who literally forgot his own Parents. Even if Delia adopted him, she's still his Mother, and I do believe that Kairi would be just as welcomed in that regard. In short: The World of Pokémon is his home, and his Skills will always reflect on Pokémon Training. Even if he hasn't ever won a Pokémon League Challenge. That'll change at some point. Hopefully. Goddamn Plot Convenience. |