An interesting concept, no doubt. But when I read to the end of this, I couldn't help but feel slightly... teased? Don't get me wrong, it was great, but if it were longer, contained a lemon, and didn't switch POVs as much, it would be fantastic! Still though, great fic. I hope you consider putting up a chapter 2 for this! Keep up the great work!

So light got L to smile after all eh? Very sweet! But I want a lemon!

I loved it:) I love LXLight xD haha Even thought i havn't seen all of Death Note yet i still love the pairing haha, thumbs up from me:)

Aaaaaaaaaaawwww! Cute! Thank goodness they didn't do any thing infront of the cameras! I would be too embarassed too read it!

Very cute! Only problem was that you kept switching POV. Can't wait to read other stuff of yours!

OMG SOOOO CUTE! I LOVED IT! GYA! *FANGIRL SQUEAL* EEEEK! CUUUUTE! PLEASE CONTINUE!

I love that so much

Awwwww! That was so cute I love it!

Wow, that was...wow 333