Good

Oop ignore the 'write a comfort scene part', I didn't see the second chapter :P. Your English is fine!

Experienced every possible emotion reading this. This is one of my absolute favourite stories! Please write more, maybe a comforting Sherlock at home? I hate to admit it, but I kinda need more?

Awesome! Loved it!

Good Lord, what an absolutely fantastic story! No one is OOC and that tends to be the case when Sherlock comforts John, but you've nailed it! Laughed, cried, squealed! Love it!

Holy cow, this was a great story! I usually think it's hard, as a writer, to write from Sherlock's perspective, but you
did an amazing job! Also, your English is far better than many native English-speakers I have encountered. I
Was very impressed! Please keep writing!

Woah I love the emotion behind this. I love how you've portrayed John and his flashbacks, how he acts. Plus, I think Sherlock's reaction to everything is spot on too

Nice ending

Nice job capturing a logical situation for a flashback and what John would be like when it was over

They're cute ;)

Wow this is a really good story, thank you for writing this

You probably don't check this anymore :) but I just found it and I wanted to let you know that I loved this story. Your English is fairly exceptional actually - I would know because I'm American and I got all A grades in English :) Anyway- I love the way you captured the depth of Watson - BBC Sherlock's Watson is so much more than a "sidekick". When I watch the show - I feel like there is a lot under the surface of John Watson's calm exterior. You articulated my thoughts so well - Thank You for sharing! Liz

Dr. Morgernstern? I wouldn't trust that guy with my surgery! Sequel?

I feel this deserves to be continued, are you planning to do so?

Wow man, (or woman) that is better grammar than most people on this site and English isn't your native languege!? I am really impressed.