This was so well done and I love how you portrayed the characters in this story. Sakura is so sassy and Sasuke wasn't brooding. He was actually so funny! Thank you for this, it was a treat

I adored the ending on this one with analytical Sasuke breaking down doctor Sakura and moving in for the final kiss. Special kudos for you for keeping the attraction going strong without actual physical rewards throughout. Keeping it innocent gives you double stars in my book! And what a first kiss, perfectly awkward and yet... look how quick that second kiss followed!

The plot nicely unfolded, starting with his psychological issues that needed special attention. I like how Sasuke learns about his attraction and ease around Sakura while going through his scheduled regimen.

The food scenes had me reveling in their special time together. It's wonderful the way sound and feeling are incorporated into the story that give it an extra dimension. You even snuck dango in there! I had to smile about that!

So much can be insinuated from that ending. I like how it sizzles.

Funny that your profile picture captures some of the feeling each feels for each other too. Everything's put together in such a perfect package. Thanks for sharing!

wowwww this is so sweet

but i cant take how can they have a first kiss

so rushhhh

but cuteeeee

This is like one of THE best one-shots I've read in my entire lige omg it was all mushy n AWESOME I loved it .
U go girl ! CHA!

I love reading your stories, they are always fabulous. I loved this one too XD

Love that you wrote this from Sasuke's POV! _

Ohmygoodness! Look at them hanging out like a married couple being all cute and stuff!

Haha, shy!Sasuke for the win. I bet he would a bit awkward when came to stuff like that. Oh well, it's still endearing.

This was cute :) Great work!

Sweet! :)

So now I know inside Sasuke's mind... so many thoughts about Sakura XD ehehehe

Gahh! I live your stories! They always leave me wanting more!

So beautiful, I ruv it 33

awwwww :) awesome! the last scene was alittle fast. you could've added a bit more drama but it was fun to read! :)

good one ...seriously enjoyed reading it ...keep up the wonderful work

Wonderful! and so sweet, I just hope they can really end up like this in the future... ja ne!

Cute