I'm gonna call my friend angel a cat from now on he's really lazy XD

I hit my sister with a bike once.

lol you should write one where Steve uses the Jazz music to his advantage!

Sorry if I sound like a hitch but why is it called lemon lollipop if there is no lemon

Good job!

why should every girl own a silk nightgown? nightgowns are annoying, silk is uncomfortably weightless during sleep, and just, gown? why? too girly :P

apart from that, seriously loved this chapter, i'm defo adding it to a notepad in my usb to read again and again

update!

Adorable! I LOVE this! PLEASE update SOON!

So cute! Awesome and funny and sweet! Update soon please!

Dear Avengerchick354,

There is already a such story in my profile, please check "Who are you without the suit?" ;)

I'm really liking your story! I think the bike one was really cute, and I was wondering if you could show Stever or Tony finding put the other was ticklish :) Please? I think the fact that the personification of America or the symbolism of every cocky trust fund baby could both be brought down with tickling. Adorable. Just a suggestion, you obviously have a good idea why you're doing! Continue please!

These are some really cute little stories, I'm enjoying them a lot! However, I'm going to take a shot in the dark and guess that you're not a native English speaker, so I'll offer you a couple grammatical pointers for future use :)
Firstly, if you follow dialogue with something like "he said", then you want to place a comma at the end of the dialogue instead of a period. ex: "I like you," he said INSTEAD OF "I like you." he said. Also, I saw on your profile that you like to use hyphens instead of quotations and that is totally your call, but for me at least it makes the dialogue feel a lot more flat and unnatural, as if it's part of the narrative instead of actual speaking. In basically all English writing I have ever seen, quotations (“ ” or ' ', depending on if you choose the American or British way) are always used and I would recommend employing them when writing in English for a presumably English audience.
Another tip is simply for verbs. There are three basic forms of verb when in the past tense in English. Using the verb "did" for an example, there's "he did" and "he was doing", which you've been using beautifully, but there's also another tense that takes you even FURTHER into the past, such as for a flashback, like in your first chapter, and that would be "he had done", or "he had danced", or "he had said", so on so forth. When your entire narrative is already in the past tense (as is normal), you want to make sure you use that tense when referring to something even further in the past.
These are just some tips from someone who's always working on a secondary language (and yeah, it's “handlebars” ;3) If you need it, “ ” is a really good translating site that explains when to use words and will conjugate verbs really well. Either way, I definitely enjoyed your work and I can't wait to read some more additions; the stories are just so random and innocent and sweet - Keep writing!

Aaaaawww so CUTE! update soon please!

Lol so cute! More please!