I like how you still had Pumyra's fight but that fatal moment when she was fated to fall Lion-o rescues her instead because they had met before the battle.

I also like how you had Cheetara address Tygra at the start. I imagine we are going to have some different issues in play for the spirit stone.

Another solid chapter.

Though I wish you had found a way to break up the scenes with some kind of symbol like a line of "8888" to indicate a scene shift or perspective change. It can be a bit jarring having it all run into together.

The original scenes and behind the scenes was great. I liked how more is hinted at in the relationships of others.

So Pumyra is a medic not a warrior in this and she keeps bumping into Lion-o.

that was amazing

I think I like this better.

Wonderful! I adore Pumyra. She was such a PRESENCE when they introduced her, and things got pretty tragic toward the end. I'm happy to find a fic exploring her character.

I think this is well-written so far, although yeah, it does rely heavily on the first episode (but honestly, that's okay with me).

I also liked the further peeks into Tygra's head, and really enjoyed seeing Cheetara through new eyes. Nicely done!

Anne

this is really awsome. period

Wish this could happen in the show.

Yikes! Thundera is under attack by lizards with Modern tech.

Nice work. That's cute when Pumyra kissed Lion-O

Nice work, can you also try a "what if" story of when Lion-O's mother didn't died after she gives birth to him?

This. Is. Awesome! I hope you decide to keep going with this. It'd be interesting to see how you rewrite the story with Pumyra joining in the beginning instead of the end. Just one question though, are you planning on having Kit andKat join Lion-O?

Like the story so far and it's nice to see that Pumyra is part of the team early on. Hope to see more of this story soon.

This chapter was most definitely intriguing. What blows me away is that Lion-O came back for Pumyra like he promised. So now, Pumyra is part of Lion-O's team. I definitely enjoy that. I look forward to more "ThunderCats" from you, LJ.