Why you no updaaaat? This story was getting good.

Ugh, please continue this! So good!

WHAT THE HECK HAPPENS NEXT I MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST KNOOOOOOOWWWWWW!

Is this going end up as a shadilver story or sonadow please tell me it's sonadow I hate shadilver .

two of my fave pairings!

Don't worry about it just dont forget to update the next chapter k? ;)

continuacion please!

Dude, you seriously need to continue on with this. Already addicted to it. :D

Wow. That "Lord Kelvin" guy is a real dick, ain't he? Whatever. He doesn't matter because I am a reader who enjoys your stories! (This one included.)

As for the actual story, I have a few things to say:

1: I am so glad Sonic didn't turn into a pig.
2: Silver's mom sounds just like my dad. *shudder*
3: I fully approve of Silver's plushie collection. ;) Us male versions of fangirls gotta stick together!

Jus' keep on writing. XD

I can relate to Silver's situation with his mom (NO MOM THERE'S NO "CURE") But why is it tagged Silver and Shadow? shouldn't it be Silver and Sonic? and I'm confused about the tunnel and all

This is so mysterious! I love it! Update soon please! I need to know what happens next! XD

Is the next chapter up yet? Because I need it! X3 Don't listen to Lord Kelvin Tails Luv-er, he/ she is just jealous of your awesome writing skills! I like how you changed the eating scene! The whole 'Sonic has turned into a pig' thing would have been weird. Funny, but weird. XD I wonder who you're going to make as no-face... Maybe, Mephiles? I don't know. I'm just trying to make this extremly long so Lord Kelvin's review is not seen when you first look at reviews on your story. XD I wonder if Sonic is going to work at the bath house, because he hates water, and a bath house is just a heated swimming pool. (That's what my brother calls it.) Like I said before, you're an awesome writer! Don't let the Kelvin get you down! He practically said the same thing in my review! He's like a broken record! XD

Half of your summary is a waste.

The 'summary sucks' part doesn't inspire confidence in the story, you know. For a random reader, this might as well be a door shut in their face.

Skipped the italicised notes. Dedications on the biggest fanfic site in the world tend to have irrelevance other readers don't appreciate. I'd love to have a story dedicated to the random reader, though. That should have exciting words. Hopefully, not in italics that are bothersome to read.

I suppose, this is why the first line of the actual story fits like a glove. The rest was pretty much the wrong cup of tea. When I saw the homophobic mother comment, I thought it'd be something different. As in, actual drama with something realistic happening. In the end, it was a generic homosexual Sonic story. Everyone's aroused and gay by default, and we have no reason to believe them at all. It might as well be a true blue AU, but even in a different universe there are concepts of motivation or cause and effect. Sexuality isn't a major topic in the actual material, so a bit of a warm up would do the readers a great favour. Most importantly, they would know that things are as they are because it makes sense, not because it's a fangirlish dream. Those dreams come true at a cost greater than their benefits.

Which makes me wonder, why people consider to post dedications to one person in public. There's always IM, email, and no random readers that would skip your irrelevant notes.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.