Hahaha this was great! Love how Melody almost missed her cue at the end!

Loooooved it! So sad about James, but loved it so much.

Genial b

This story is so exciting, almost finished reading it. I can't wait to touch up on the sequel

Oh that is so nice it is going with the rest of my best stories thanks for a very good read are you going to take this to the next level I hope so.

I think you did a fine job writing this story. Not my favorite but a great effort to put it all down for us to read. Thank you.

I love it, it was amazing !

Absolutely adored this story two hours well spent. thankyou. Going to read sequel in a bit. :)

Wow - loved the ending - although I'm sure it's just the beginning of Patrick and Teresa's new life together. Now I can read your continuation with a clear conscience!

I honestly don't know how I missed this story. I am so enjoying it now. I must tell you that I love Patrick interacting with Melody and Teresa. What a fun way (well except a little scary for Melody) to finally get him into Teresa's bed!

This story was excellent, I couldn't stop reading! Some parts were hilarious, I could just imagine Jane turning up to yoga just to embarrass Lisbon! I couldn't help but laugh out loud at the part where Jane is looking for something to wrap Melody in and Lisbon says she isn't a corpse :D

Kiss on the nose? Oh God hemorrhage of cute!if I was once an ice cube I would now be a puddle :'D

I think my heart busted a valve when he kissed the end of her damn ...seriously. Sniffle ;)

Thank you for the story, I loved it. BTW when I read the quote, for some reason instead of seeing John Rohn I saw Red John. Weird... way too much mentalist... :)

Awwwww, this is a brilliant story! So fluffy and cute :) loved it! Lol, I tht the quote at the end was by Red John and I freaked a bit! Haha, thank god I went back to read it again ;P