Reviews for Mortal Plaything |
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kaayrakoi chapter 1 . 4/7/2016 So gooooooood! I absolutely love your work and would love to see some of your Loki x reader become multichaptered. Such wonderful work, can't wait to read more! |
Shield agent hummingbird chapter 1 . 4/3/2016 Please continue I need more |
InsaneAndHappyAboutIt chapter 1 . 3/21/2014 wow...I have to be honest. I've never read a story (a smutty one at that) where i was a character (technically speaking) Damn...It's like all my dirty dreams (of which there have been a surplus since seeing Thor 2) written down and my, what brilliant writing it was! just WOW... XD |
SophiaGrey chapter 1 . 2/15/2014 Bravo! Holy Christ in a fucking hand basket! I think I need a cigarette after this, your writing is amazing! |
JK-Quinn chapter 1 . 9/19/2013 This is the best thing I've read in my life- and I've read a LOT. 3 |
MontresorMari chapter 1 . 8/10/2013 ęnę... My reaction O.O O-O O_O GAHHH- *nose bleed* I always thought that Loki would be the receiver while Thor to be the seme. Guess not in this fic... xD still enjoyed though! |
Alisia chapter 1 . 7/21/2013 Woah. That was hot... |
Shelle chapter 1 . 4/1/2013 this is the absolute best thing I've ever read. so well worded and put together I LOVE IT! I really felt there and I'm now exited to go back to school because it won't be too long before Loki comes to sweep me off my feet, again! :p |
OpheliaxEternal chapter 1 . 2/2/2013 Had to review this! I loved it! Omg what glorious smut you have composed! I hate when reading smut when the guy calls the girl little- my little this or her little what have you- it just creeps me out, but here I thought it was tastefully done. I think there were some original positions in this and very believable dialogue, I really liked it! Thanks for writing this!... write another one ;) |
cinder16 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012 another please! :D |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2012 Oh. Yes. |
Isaha chapter 1 . 9/25/2012 Fuck, I can't believe you even thought about writing this. It was such a turn-on, and more. Touched myself reading it. And I think actually both of the brothers are very much my type xD Thanks ! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2012 Oooh I hope there will be a second part to this one...! |
Enosimania chapter 1 . 9/14/2012 This was a whole festival of awesome smut. There are no words. I will say though, there were two bits I especially loved: when she (or, the reader? I'm not normally a fan of 2nd person narratives) refused to kiss Thor and he felt hurt and damn all the feels; and when Loki was "almost concerned" about it hurting her. I melted into a puddle, and it wasn't even a dirty one. I can't wait for an update on this (and then another, and another). |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2012 Wow. That was the perfect erotic story imo. And even better to see believable dom Loki over Thor. Wow again. Gods I wish I wasn't on a bus... |