T_T
This chapter made me cry...

Wow. You are working the Zelda references hard on this chapter. They are good and all, but Inhave to say I prefer Phineas story line so far.

Okay really Nice idea, but you should have it betaed.

yourpossessive (ownership)
you'reyou are
thereplacing
theirpossessive (ownership)
they'rethey are
Sorry, it's just really annoying me, I'm really big on grammar lol

yourpossessive (ownership)
you'reyou are
thereplacing
theirpossessive (ownership)
they'rethey are
Sorry, it's just really annoying me, I'm really big on grammar lol

I see you haven't done anything in quite some time so I'm not sure if you'll get this, but, all I have to say is awe inspiring! Such a great fantasy story with Phineas and Ferb! I have read over 600 fantasy books and own a good part of them, and I would have probably bought this if it was available. If you do publish a book and It's fantasy please let me know the title. And one other thing... were the hounds a bit of the immortal Robert Jordan's work perhaps?

This story is SO epic! And I just figured out, I think the master is Candace! I'll know soon if I'm right! :D

Brilliant story, was the spear based on the Sword of Shannara by any chance?

The horror, this story is over
I've know it for soo long
Why did it have to end
I knew it would happen but, I wish it didn't, its one of the few good adventure stories out there out of like 2000 other stories
oh well, I loved this story and am gonna miss it
see ya;)

I love your story too much to see it end like this
so it cant be the end due to my own sense of logic
and the story doesn't say complete
see ya;)

WHAT!##$%*&_)

very good ending not at all what i expected. but all round nice chapter.

Wait a moment. CANDACE?! She's the big bad?! In some twisted way, it makes sense. But still! I didn't see that coming at all. And now I have to wonder, if she really is the big bad, will they actually have to fight? Or will they find some way home together?

Of course, all that hinges on Candace actually being the one behind everything that's happened. We know she started this, but I guess she could be as much a victim of someone else as be the one who has done all of that...

I'm enjoying this so far, but you really need to do so proof reading. There is a plethora of simple mistakes that are easily corrected.
That being said, you have a good writing style and an original idea here that I can't wait to finish reading.

OK, so now it's Phinbella, Ferbnessa, Buford/Lilli, and Baljeet/Vina? Ah, I love romance...