very interesting concept, with the guilds and all, I must say that one dimensional Hogwarts that has very few possibilities of growing seems kinda out of place, it is supposed to be foremost of schools after all. Points being also counted individually is also very sensible, as otherwise it wouldn't really matter all that much but then, as is nearly everywhere regarding point and grading, there is a matter of subjectivity but, well, there is no need to go there, is there?. thanks for sharing, it was really quite a read

This is one of the best story plots I've ever read in this platform. I really like the additional competition that was entailed with the guild system. It's a shame this is abandoned, it would be a phenomenal masterpiece if it wasn't. But I respect the author in regards of their decision. But apart from that, I really love the writing style!

Nice story, too bad it's abandoned.

Damn that was a good pilot episode.

This seems abandoned... I guess asking for an update is pointless? :(

This is so good, pity it only has 8 chapters. can you add more? I love the story!

Great so far but I have to ask did you use the motto of the Martells from Game of Thrones for the family motto of House Longbottom. I mean normally fanfic authors let the readers know when they embed references from other stories or pop culture I don’t know if you purposefully didn’t mention it or not but just curious.

great story so far! i’m hoping for a unique experience; and you’ll likely not disappoint :)
i really enjoy your writing style as well. thanks for taking the time to write this

so your a facial artist?

Like your mottos for Potter family. They seem quite rightbfor them. the second one is really fitting to your Harry.
Through I have to admit that among various mottos I always liked best "Bold and Crafty" for Potters.

I love the way you have introduced many different characters and your writing style. However I believe that Harry needs more definition as a character for example : a wider range of emotions. I would like to see Harry get very angry or break down crying, to show that he does have weaknesses.

Very well written and thought out. Love the twist you've put in with guilds and the new point system. Impressive work, very nicely done.

The words for the most noble and ancient house of potter is “ Death is the last enemy to be conquered “

Well idk what's the point of guilds

For being your first story ii have to admit that it is pretty good so far . I enjoy as to where the plot line is heading to . Good luck for all your future content !

- CjM