It's been 19 years since you updated temptation please update it.

I loved this and hope to see much more like it in your new story, although I'm sad to see you not continuing your awesome fic Temptation this went perfectly with the story. I hope to see more of your wonderful writing and updates.

Great story, though this line left me a bit confused

Though she knew it was a false emotion, Bastila could not deny she felt loved in these moments.

So she doesn't think Revan loves her? I'd have thought this far into their relationship and the way they are with each other they would have said it.

Yay your back!

Nice read too! Very good job.

I actually cried when I saw you post something. Thank you so much, from the bottom of my heart, for sharing your gift with us once again.

I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU ARE STILL AROUND!
*fangirl squeal*
I ADORE your stories!
I hope you are able to find time to finish Temptation soon since all your fans have been dying not knowing what happens.
EHEHEHE! I couldn't believe my eyes when I checked my email and saw a new DoseofReality story had been added!

Not too shabby to say the least. The only thing that I could say is a little more talking before and after the intimacy, but that is just my opinion

Woa! You are back! This is so cool! You have no idea what this means for me and my sister! We were like "WHAAA!" when we saw you hadn't updated 'Temptation' for more than a year. WE have been waiting for your return! And now you are back! And with an excellent chapter. Although, where does this happen? It can't be in the timeline of 'Temptation' because Bastila had already given Revan "everything". So, will this scene be in 'Temptation', or is this an exclusive VIP chapter for all of us? :) Hope, really hope, you continue updating. Cheers, and WRITE ON!

Holy cow! You're alive!

How long before can we expect an update to Temptation? (That's my polite way of saying, Pretty please don't wait four years to post an update.)

This scene had good conflict, by the way. Most people posting in the rated M category don't really get that in order for their stories to work, they need conflict, otherwise it's just plain meaningless smut.

The rest of you wannabe writers out there need to learn from this writer!

very nice. glad to see you are still around

Nice one shot and it was very nice to see some more work from you, but I would have prefered some more work on temptation as that is the best story I have ever read with the Revan/Bastila pairing and every time I read it I am frustrated it has not been finished or that there is not a few more chapters. But at least with this addition I hope that you will get back to Temptation soon, you are a good author and I love your work so keep it up

david