Great story!

Very very good

great story!

puh, can i breathe now again, please?

seems to be everything is working out ok!

what? now peter? this carson is really a bad one!

dad? was it really his father? what happened?

glad that peter seems to have found him!

hope mozzie can do something about the clue...
that leaves me wondering who sent it? and was it really meant for peter to get it?

love your ideas of neal's past!

neal! poor guy!
what on earth does this carson want from him?

me too!

great story so far!
what happened to neal?

intriguing first chapter! i'm curious where you'll go with this!

really loved the ending
and i feel the same with Neal's father..that he isn't bad as he was projected and so is Neal

Love the plot do far! Omg so many fanfics, my brain is so confuse with the whole Neil father thing xD

I really enjoyed reading your story. A good ending. Someday can you maybe do a tiny sequel or something or not. Either way is good :)

Muse Union? You've been spending too much time with Mozzie!

Lovely ending! Glad both of the boys are okay and that they told each other the truth. I wish we could get more of this kind of closeness on the show :)

Hope your muse doesn't hinder your next WC fic!

Blessings,
Fierce