| Reviews for Inbetween the Lines |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 9/22/2019 Absolutely loved it just sad there isn't more! |
| Rae chapter 11 . 2/22/2016 update please |
 lainey007 chapter 8 . 10/3/2014 Hi there! I've read your stories before but I'm reading these again! They're always a good read! Did you ever post the dream scene? Could you send? Hope you write more of these! Definitely my favorite! |
| lena chapter 5 . 4/26/2014 oh it is so interesting! Belle should make him lit the candle by himself- i order to check her theory! |
| Sessha Lebeau chapter 11 . 3/23/2014 Just wanted to tell you how wonderful your these stories are. I just adore them, I missed my stop in the bus and my train pass by before I even realise it even arrived. You got me hooked from the first sentence. Do hope you can find time for an update soon. A prompt if you have the time please:- A excursion away from the Castle for Belle and Rumpel. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/23/2013 these are all so wonderful |
| jewel415 chapter 11 . 7/20/2013 My goodness what a delightful tale! Please keep writing this story until it is finished! |
| jewel415 chapter 6 . 7/20/2013 I have read the first 6 chapters of your story and I am in love! You write wonderfully well. What an imagination to come up with this story line-yet you are able to remain true to the characters we have come to love watching Once Upon A Time! Thank you so much for sharing your talent. |
| she.s.a.shy.one chapter 1 . 6/14/2013 This is phenomenal! Loved every chapter, well done! |
| Rubens Lilium chapter 4 . 5/18/2013 I. Love. This! RumBelle forever! xD |
| Avatar-Scarlett chapter 11 . 4/29/2013 Please do the S2 missing scenes! We all need a bit of fluff right about now! I love your stories and your style of writing. Thank yu so much! |
| IrrelevantLogic chapter 11 . 4/5/2013 "If you were my wife, I think perhaps you would try more valiantly to leave." Ooooooh! "I took the liberty of moving the dungeon. It's now in the tower." Laughed out loud. Oh, Rumple. One thing I love about your writing is your references, like Winston Churchill and Mark Twain (plus, of course, the Oz reference in the deal chapter). Brilliant and subtle. :D Overall, fantastic. Really, really, outstandingly well done. I'd like to see the proposal scene, if you want to tack that on the end? Thank you for writing such a wonderful collection of vignettes! |
| IrrelevantLogic chapter 10 . 4/5/2013 "She had been left with a livid red mark on *her* pale skin". I suspect that was the result of originating this scene in first person? :) As for that last question...oh dear! O.O |
| IrrelevantLogic chapter 9 . 4/5/2013 *Disdain*, not "distain" That's not true," needs an opening quotation mark. The actual line was "My price is her," not "The price is her." Other than that...that is perfect. Perfectly perfect. |
| IrrelevantLogic chapter 8 . 4/5/2013 Please, at the end of a question, even if it's in quotation marks, don't put a comma. It always needs to be a question mark at the end of a question. "It strikes me that anything worth having is not without grief." ABSOLUTE PERFECTION. The End. Accidental paragraph in between "grasp" and "his damaged knee". "Belle has left you" put a comma here "Mr Gold" &c. "I would have said yes way back then too." Yes, exactly. Good for her. |
