Reviews for Swagger |
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kirallie chapter 2 . 6/29/2013 good work |
luinrina chapter 2 . 6/14/2013 Good thing the femme kept bugging you to continue to story. It's a lovely chapter and provides so much insight into not only the dynamics between 'Bee and Arcee but the ones among the Autobots currently on Earth as well. I really loved to see how Arcee and 'Bee got to the sparring Sam and al-Sharif stumbled into. Also, it was nice to see how much influence a femme can have over a mech (even one as stoic as Ratchet LOL). The entire scene proved what Optimus always told Sam, that femmes were few but held great power. They might be easily seen like human women, frail and in need of protection. But Arcee though smaller than the mechs proves over and over again that she's anything but a person that needs protection. I also loved the detail about the Autobots keeping secret on how much energon they still possess, even from Sam and Will who they consider close friends. It shows once again that while they may have allied with the humans, the Autobots are still wary about revealing too much about themselves to the humans as a whole. Thanks for that beautiful chapter. |
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 2 . 6/8/2013 Arcee and Bumblebee will both be okay. |
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 1 . 6/8/2013 That seems to have worked. |
Harm Marie chapter 2 . 6/3/2013 Liked this. |
RK-Striker-JK-5 chapter 2 . 6/2/2013 This was GREAT. Also, I love that song. I sang it in chorus. Yeah, they'll be okay. Arcee DID need this, here. |
IronRaven chapter 2 . 6/2/2013 And this is why we like Arcee. She's about as dainty as an anvil and still still has a soft side. Bee has been spending too much time with humans. He's suffering from all the symptoms of the illness called Love, including a radical drop in brain function. |
imaginethat96 chapter 2 . 6/2/2013 You are some sort of writing god! If you guys publish any book and it is for sale I will buy it without a second thought! |
1Timberwolf chapter 2 . 6/2/2013 Love this story. Can't wait for more. |
Araytigre chapter 2 . 6/1/2013 Gotta luv Arcee and Bee, and as you said, they know each other all too well. That, and they care so much for each other at a level that few can attain, unless they shared the same frame or brain (they already share their sparks, if only between themselves). She had to "Show" Bee that she was not a complete invalid, so that he could do right by Samuel Prime, and not be (too) distracted by her recovery, however long it takes. Fortunately she was able to convince Ratchet, Optimus, and Ironhide of this fact too, however grudgingly. Thank You. TTFN |
FatesShadow83 chapter 2 . 6/1/2013 Loved this! |
InsaneGrizzlies chapter 2 . 6/1/2013 Hahaha! Loved this. I love the Arcee you guys write, she's just so wonderful. |
Quathis chapter 2 . 6/1/2013 It is very intriguing to see how a recently resparked Autobot recovers from that level of trauma without having the Prime bonus. Especially with an old boyfriend playing mother hen. Always interesting to see their thought processes and how they compare with human ones. Until next time. |
yamiishot chapter 2 . 6/1/2013 Oh gosh those two are too sweet X3 |
Araytigre chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 A fun little segue between stories, and only Arcee can set him up like that (and get away with it). In this case, Optimus saw the truth behind Bee's request. Thank You. TTFN |