I can't really right properly its its i don't think i can come up with something

I could tell immediately this story was somehow connected to the children's story "The Velveteen Rabbit. I used to read the story when I was little and I still have the book even today. I really love your story!

Great job.

This is beautiful -just 's so hard to find good OzAlice fics, but where there is any well-written ones it's always something special. -Heck, from the summary I could tell it the special because of the the concept that came to mind.

Oz and Alice are magical. plain and simple.

Man I love this! The Velveteen Rabbit was one of my favorites childhood stories as well. I really love this.

So cute! It was really well written, and I really like it!

This was really cute, I enjoyed it a lot :)
I would like to see another heartfelt story like this a little bit longer, of course, but I doubt it would be able to be as charming. Also I've never heard of the Velveteen Rabbit but now I want to read it...

That was beautiful. And I LOVE the Velveteen Rabbit. It's been ages since I read it though.

This is really sweet, you captured their emotions well!

SO nice...