Reviews for A Mistake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It was a cute story. Well, I was a little bit worried about the pregnancy (I usually avoid teen pregnancy). Reaping kids is bad, but reaping pregnant teens...! Now, I’m curious about what would happened if there was a case... Sending not only a kid, but a pregnant one into the arena would be dangerous for Snow. They would made the mother lose the baby before sending her? And that only would work if her state is not noticeable... (without taking into account the girl’s mind state). Well, I’m pretty sure that the reapings are rigged, so, avoid reaping pregnant teens could be an acceptable choice, unless all districts realise about that fact. So... Peeta’s mom actually gets a baby girl in her family... Did she change? Not really fond of her character (specially after reading lots of fics, where she is basically evil). Maybe in this fic they could made amends... sort of. Thank you for your time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad I found out about this story. Looking forward to reading it through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story captivated me. Amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a wonderful story! i had doubts before reading it because i'm not much of a fan for teenage pregnancy stories. but then i looked at the reviews and everyone are saying how beautiful it is so i dived in: and it truly is! |
![]() ![]() Read this entire story in less than 3 hours...beautifully written! |
![]() ![]() Aww...slow burnn Everlark for the win! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous |
![]() ![]() This was cute |
![]() ![]() I can't wait to read more of your story. :) |
![]() ![]() I have literally memorized this story. I can't even remember how many times I've read it. It is amazing. I love your writing so much and I love the way you portray the characters. It is fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us! |
![]() ![]() They need a toasting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow how did I ever miss this story. I really enjoy it! |
![]() ![]() This is a perfect story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was excellent! Thank you for writing it! |