Really enjoyed reading, hope you finish this and that your book is successful.

it's been a long time and im feeling nostalgic so im glad your not dead. i read until chapter 69 until i started reading other stuff. i always made sure you were still there though. i hope there isn't a bad reason you were gone for so long. please don't die. - Delusion Xerox (it looks similar cause it's based of that)

There is a plot hole in this chapter. It says that Team Rocket thinks Rick is dead but he literally got on the phone with Giovanni a couple chapters ago.

Hello, I am reviewing to address several mistakes you made in this chapter. First, Rick had asked for the superior officers, and corporal/sergeant are among the lowest ranking officers (Corporal is just above private, while sergeant is just above that. They may be squad leaders, but not superior officers). Second, a colonel is a couple of ranks higher than a captain, so going from a colonel to a captain is actually a demotion. Now I'm not sure how ranks work in the Sanctuary but I'm pretty sure you meant it to be similar to, if not completely the same as modern army ranks.
Well that's all I have to say for now. Hope this was helpful/informative.

Okay, there's.. How can you catch a ride on an unaware salamence? It's not like they're big enough to NOT notice something gallade-sized clinging to their back. How can he read the minds of absol, they're dark type!

The size of this story tells me it might get better, I bet you've really grown your writing style as you went along. I want to keep going, but whew you might want to go back and alter some of your first chapters when you can, they're really rough.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing your stories with the world, though! It's always AA precious thing.

Ohhhh my gosh! I remember reading this and showing my brother 5 years ago So insane to come back and still see it here. Definitely am going to reread. This is truly one of my favorite fics of all time to come back to

Oh the power of jinxing oneself

I know this chapter is 5-6 years old now but... that four move limit is actually exclusive to the games. You see pokemon (especially Pikachu) with at least five moves so... yeah.

I'm not gonna lie i seriously forgot who was alpha until i remember all of those 2 am night... like right now

Congrats on getting near 1,000,000 words total. I honestly haven't checked this story out in quite some time, since I kinda moved past the pokemon fan fiction phase and onto writing my own Naruto Fan Fiction, called "A Shinobi's Perception"
I started a Pokemon fan fiction... but I lost the drive to do it since even I can see that it already is crappy in the first 500 words.
If you at least know things about Naruto, then if you can, I would like you to beta-read my stuff that I come out with. If you aren't, thats fine anyways.
Well, I suppose that once people read this chapter this review will be ignored, but it is still better than not leaving a review, right? Anyways, I got to go, bye, and I'll keep reading the stuff you come up with.

When you decide to make a new Pokemon you will be targetted by a group of trolls who will falsely review your story. They go by the name "St Elmo's Fire", "Farla", "Reeds of Enki, "DLPxBeAsTxSnIpE", "Talarc", "thisispingas", "Act" and BeHopeful. It's best to block them before they become a problem for you. Do not talk to them either for as they will send your PM down over at their blog.

Why they do it is rather simple. They think they know better then everyone else. Really they are the most hated users on the site for this reason.

Why are there no mail gardevoir?

If he was a kirlia when his trainer died, how did he become a gallade and not a gardevoir? It's not like dawn stones are just laying around in the wild.

I've started reading this fic a few weeks ago, keep up the good work!

Rick finally socked zenek in his place and is about to enjoy torturing Giovanni. Now that's a twisted happy ending if I've ever seen one