good work:D

Totally enjoyed this one. A light fun romp. Esp the ending. Sometimes the only thing these boys needs is just to laugh a little. I mean they have the most depressing lives ever! LOL! Great job, esp on the ending.

Aw. I miss these brothers and the love they had for each other. But this line ""He could see on his brother's face, where the glow of the fire hit his features just right… how tired, worn out and scared Dean looked. How his brother would give anything to be able to get Sam to sleep in a real bed, with real heat, real blankets. Big brother and dad's 'watch out for Sammy' playing in the flickers of the fire. / He sighed. He wished he'd be able to give all that to Dean too."" really got to me for some reason.

Some days their lives are really hard. I think they would almost do better to work at night and shower and sleep in suburbs during the day when they have seen 2 cars leave in the morning.

Nice little snippet of the boys lives - a little bit sad, and yet hopeful at the same time. Well done!

Good one.

Now, THAT was a close call! Don't want to piss off a skunk. :( That smell never comes out. We had a dog that had a close encounter of the worst kind and poor guy smelled ALL summer, no matter what we did. :(

Nice one, tho. :)

Oh, that liquid will remove paint from a car, too. lol

Eheheh! Cute
It has a great atmosphere building up to a climax to it and then, suddenly... The poor skunk! LOL I'm glad that at least it escaped!
See you next
R.

You totally reeled me in - I was so sad reading the first part (each wanting to give the other more than squatting) and then was so amused by the last part! Well done!

Awesome story yet again! Gotta love Dean's humor lol You captured their characters perfectly. They're lucky the skunk didn't spray when Sam pulled the trigger! That would've made their stay a bit more unpleasant... haha

Sonic, I liked this story. You wrote a winner. Loved the banter between the brothers and Dean's teasing comments were great. I'm surprised Sammy didn't get shot when he fired at the 'fugly'.
lol *rolls*

Hey to read your stuff was ace.I smiled at "Pepe le Pew".Not seen that cartoon in don't show them anymore over here,just in case the "little darlings"(bloody kids)copy what they do!Anyway now going to bed with a big grin on my ya.

Cute. They are so conscious of the supernatural they jump straight to that conclusion.